TOEFL 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:keats
【IBT机经-1】Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: In order to succeed, you should be more like others than be different from everyone else.
题目分析
翻译
你是否同意下述观点:为了成功,你更应该变得和其他人一样而不是与众不同。
指导
题目讨论为了成功应该怎样做的问题。题目中的前提条件是“获得成功“,给出了”如果人们变得和其他人相似就会取得成功“的判断。题目不难理解,和成功有关的实例也不胜枚举,分析题目和拓展写作思路时应该注意以下2点:1、明确自己的观点,到底是同意还是不同意;2、论述中要始终和”获得成功“与”自己和他人的关系“相关联,切忌脱离了题目的前提是”获得成功“。
1. 在我们的日常生活和社会历史中,获得成功的人都应该具备那些素质?这些成功人士是和其他人一样呢还是与众不同呢?请结合实例简述。
回答: 这是成功人士和普通人的对比。获得成功的人需要具备坚持不懈的素质,但是不是盲目坚持,而是做足功课,对前景有充分把握的情况下的坚持。举例阿里巴巴的马云的成功。
2. 成功人士的身上,哪些特点是具有普遍性的?那些特质是具有特殊性的?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: 这是成功人士之间的对比。都有assiduous,self-disciplined的特点.举例Steve Jobs:was strict in every step of the product- iPhone- and made it the best smartphone in the world. His hard-working and highly execution enabled his success.但是他有特殊性: the obsession of aesthetics, he focused so much on the outline of the product。或者都有审视自己的习惯,但是方法不同。
3. 变得和大家相似会出现哪些结果?在什么情况下有助于成功?什么情况下不利于成功?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: 变得相同。例如两款产品,在其他情况相同的条件下,就受外部因素影响了,如价格、地理位置等,没法获得大范围的认同。用哲学的classical empirical theory和Quine提出的broaden empirical theory来解释。
4. 变得和大家不同有哪些结果?在什么情况下有利于成功?什么情况下不利于成功?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: 变得不同。忍受孤独,内心变得强大才会成功。可以举出国深造的事例。
5. 变得和他人一样也好,不一样也罢,对成功究竟能起到多大的作用?为了获得成功,除了题目中涉及的那方面问题,还需要那些优秀的品质呢?请结合实例简述。
回答: IQ和EQ并存。好的IQ帮助你成功,而好的EQ可以维持你的成功。另外,最好能专注于一个方向,并且持之以恒的积累新知识、新技能,时刻思考能否将它们应用于自己的领域。
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作文
Almost everyone is eager to succeed at least in a specific realm. We receive education from elementary school to college or even higher only to cultivate the aptitude to think, study and gather useful information. We should admit that the accidental factors do exist, the qualities and the way we choose, however, are the final determinant to the success. Someone may deem that the convergence, rather than divergence to the way most people assume would satisfy most of the public. But in order to succeed, from my point of view, we should be more different from everyone else.
Unlike ordinary people, successful people have a spirit of persistence. But such persistence is not deaf and blind, but a steadfast heart under enough investigations and confidence to the prospective market. It is known worldwide that Alibaba makes Jack Ma, once an English teacher, to be world famous. Ten or more years ago, he foreboded the visionary of B2B or C2C business based on the convenience and incredible efficiency of e-commerce, and the enormous Chinese people and their future purchasing power. Therefore he persisted although everyone else, including his father, asserted that it was impossible in China.
Among the people successful, despite the assiduous and self-disciplined characteristics they share, each individual must have their distinguished shining-points. For example, Steve Jobs was strict in every step of the product--iPhone--and determined to make it the best smartphone in the world. His hard-working and highly execution enabled his success. However, those are not sufficient. He was obsessed  in aesthetics of his product mainly due to his study on calligraphy in college. And he also focused so much on the outline of the product. It was the detail that made iPhone popular and Jobs succeed.
Anyone who has succeeded are usually distinctively stouthearted because it is demanding for a person to bear the difference with others and the loneliness it results in. Such quality is a necessity for success. The classic empirical theory, a stem of philosophy, can perfectly give an explanation. It states that any factor which is contradictory to a general indisputable system will be refuted. That means one who follows the common routine will be safe in any situation, whereas one who alter the certain path will either blunder or create a miracle. Thus in order to create a miracle, we have to be very brave to emancipate from the restrictions and make breakthroughs.
Admittedly, to be more like others helps to raise more support and become likely to make some achievements in the short term and get credit from people who have identical ideas. But you would not make great success in the long term. Under any circumstances couldn't we lose our creativity. The best way to be creative is to focus on one direction and persevere in accumulating new knowledge and techniques, and try to employ them in our own fields at every moment.
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