TOEFL 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:钱琛
If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
题目分析
翻译
如果你可以改变你家乡的一个重要方面,你会改变什么?用具体的理由和例子支持你的观点。
指导
题目让我们设想改变家乡的某一重要方面,重点在于说明选择改变这个方面的理由。比如卫生方面的问题,它影响着家乡的市容,市民们的健康等。
1. 你的家乡在哪儿?你不喜欢家乡的哪些方面?为什么?
回答: 宜兴,车太多,医疗条件不够好,年轻人都图安逸,没有奋斗的氛围
2. 家乡存在这个问题的原因是什么?
回答: 太小了,大家都富了
3. 应该怎么改进这个方面,具体的措施是什么?
回答: 提高医疗条件,引进人才,跟世界接轨,不能窝在小城市里,就不那么注重发展
其他用户的回答
作文
If I have the power to change one thing in my hometown, I will choose to solve the problem of traffic jam. 
In previous times, my home town did not have so much cars. People lived in a quiet and pretty city, although it is small. However, with the development of economy, more and more people began to buy cars. What is more, taking the cheap price of some cars into consideration, even young people who are just having jobs choose to buying cars. So sometimes, some families own 3 cars. 
The most serious thing which is resulted from the increase of cars is the traffic jam. The city is small, the old road is narrow but hard to broaden because it is impossible to tear down the whole old city. But hardly can people live away from the old city in which have supermarkets and many wonderful shopping-malls. Not like those big cities which are also have the problem of traffic jam, my hometown has no way to relieve this problem, because the town is near the city, and we do not have any subway, if people who live in the town go to work in the city, driving by themselves seems to be the best way. Of course, there is another option, that is, taking buses, but it is always time-consuming.
And with the situation becoming more and more harsh, the parking lots cannot meet people's needs, although many parking lots nowadays choose to be built undergrounds. For example, some friends with me went to have dinner in a restaurant which is located in the center of city, we had to park our cars outside the city and walked to the destination.
In general, traffic jam seems to be not only a serious problem of big cities, but also some small cities in China. Too much traffic always cause many adverse effects on people's lives, sometimes even emotions. So the thing i want to change most in my hometown is the traffic jam.
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