GRE 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:张钧凯
How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society.
题目分析
翻译
孩子们对社会的适应程度决定了社会的命运。很不幸的是,我们还没有学会如何培养能帮助我们让社会变得更好的孩子。
指导
本题隐含了一个前提,即孩子们适应社会的能力越高,社会就会发展得越好。因此,题目的后半句可以理解为“我们现在还不知道如何培养孩子更好地适应社会(,所以,社会不会发展的更好)”。题目可以切入的角度有两个:一是孩子们对社会的适应能力是否能决定社会的发展,二是我们是否知道如何培养孩子更好地适应社会,从而让社会发展得更好。
1. 孩子们适应社会的能力强(或弱)表现在哪些方面?请举例说明。
回答: 与人交流的能力 作为团队成员,在团队中发挥的作用 如何对待他人的评价 能够根据社会的变化及时调整自己
2. 社会发展会受到哪些重要因素的影响?这些因素哪些是和孩子们适应社会的能力有关的?请举例说明。
回答: 新知识、新技术的开发和应用 社会的稳定与和谐 社会成员的个人素质 政府的管理 战争或和平
3. 适应社会能力强(或弱)的孩子会对社会做出什么贡献?会给社会带来什么麻烦?请举例说明。
回答: 能通过交流消除误会,促进社会的稳定;易与人合作,在社会事务中能够做出自己的贡献。 不适应社会的可能会存在交流的障碍,从而造成不必要的误会;难以融入社会,很难找到自己的位置,贡献有限。
4. 我们有哪些具体的手段和方法来培养孩子适应社会?这些手段和方法在现代社会中被执行的情况如何?为什么会出现这种情况?请举例说明。
回答: 让孩子们尽早与同龄人接触,锻炼其交际能力;鼓励团队合作学习、工作,加强合作精神的培养。 执行得并不好。独生子女让孩子们缺少了少时的玩伴。
5. 哪些因素会制约我们对孩子适应社会能力的培养?请举例说明。
回答: 独生子女、父母溺爱
其他用户的回答
作文
There is a metaphor indicating that children are like the rising sun, representing the future of humans. No matter in what kind of culture or which country, people need to pay much attention on education. But I find the speakers’ arguments specious and poorly supported by empirical evidence.
 
The speaker first argues that it is how children are socialized that determines the destiny of a society. The argument may be based on a view that the Human is a socialized race. It is true that in the past, the evolution of human beings benefit a lot from socialization, and more importantly that at present, the highly developed socialization has become one of the vital forces of the development of society. The concept “Team Work” exists in all aspects of our lives including sports, business projects, scientific researches, political programs and the examinations for college students. The wide cooperation around the world requires a child to be well socialized.
 
Although I admit that socialization is one key factor of the personal qualities that influence the society, it is even not the most important one. There are other qualifications playing more significant roles such as honesty, probity, persistence, rational and technique skills. In the realm of science, persistence can sometimes be the vital factor. For instance, Thomas Edison tried and failed nearly two thousand times before he eventually found one feasible way to make the incandescent light bulb. In the realm of politics, determination sometimes stands on top of all other qualifications. During the Second World War, it is President Roosevelt’s resolute decision to declare war on Japan, which consequently reversed the war. Apart from above, many other examples also indicate that it is but not only the socialization that determines the destiny of society.
Consider the second claim that we have not yet learned how to raise children to c
reate a better society. We must first have a clear understanding of “a better society”. In my view, the definition of “a better society” should at least include better living standard for every person in the world, smaller difference between the rich and the poor and better understanding and great tolerance of different views, individual habits, cultures and religious beliefs. Today’s education, in spite of its incompleteness, has paid attention on all the three aspects above. First, in order to share a better living condition, people have to keep a balance between modernization and the natural law. Students at school today, have better opportunities to get the more advanced technique and better awareness of the limits of resources. Secondly, there are more and more influential figures focusing on the unfairness between the rich and those people struggling with illness and hunger. For example, Bill Gates was once invited to deliver a speech on the graduation ceremony of Harvard University. In his speech, he repeated that core duty of the most brilliant students in the world, graduates from Harvard, is not to pursue the personal achievements, but to eliminate the inequality between different areas. As one of the richest man in the world, Bill gave the most excellent students a much valuable lesson. In the last aspect, we have seen that youngsters are becoming more sensitive and respectful of rights of women, various ethnic and racial groups. Along with the wider and deeper cooperation among countries, more and more children choose an abroad college or university for further study and even settle down there. With respect and understanding, the young with different ideas and beliefs get along with each other well.
 To sum up, when it comes to what contributes to make a better society, it is not how a child a socialized but other factors, such as persistence, self-confidence, technique skills. And even there exist some disappointing flaws in the present educational system, our society is steadily evolving into a more civilized, modernized and respectful one. Therefore, I fundamentally disagree with both assertions of the speaker.
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