GRE 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:邓馨
The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals. [Specific Task Instruction: Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.]
题目分析
翻译
目前生活的奢华和方便阻碍了一个人成长为真正强大和独立的个体。 [说明:写一篇文章,讨论你同意或反对这个说法达到什么程度,并解释你选择这个观点的理由。在展开和支持你的观点时,你需要考虑这个说法可能在哪些方面成立或者不成立,并解释你所考虑的这些东西如何体现你的观点]
指导
本题改编自老GRE的ISSUE26"Although many people think that the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life are entirely harmless, in fact, they actually prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals"。题目要求阐述的是奢华和方便的生活是否会影响一个人的成长,换句话说,就是要论证奢华和方便的生活是否会影响到人的独立性和能力的培养。这个题目切忌对生活的方便之处进行罗列;并且,在写作的时候一定要有明确的观点,并针对观点来选择可以使用的理由和论据。
1. 回忆一下自己的成长过程,生活条件如何?这种生活条件是否对成长造成了影响?如果是,具体阐述是什么影响,并举例说明。
回答: 生活在城市里会导致很多常识和基本能力的缺失,使城市的孩子相对不发达的地方来说吃不了苦,但是城市里激烈的生存模式也会使人在思想上更坚强,抗打击能力和竞争能力更强
2. 奢华和方便的生活会给人的独立性和能力培养提供什么好处?带来什么问题?请举例说明。
回答: 使人不再依赖于他人,更独立,但是会令人与人之间更加梳理,而且习惯了舒适的生活会使人更加脆弱
3. 人的成长,尤其是个人能力和独立性,会受到哪些因素的影响?这些因素是否都和生活质量有关系?如果有,具体是什么关系?请举例说明。
回答: 与教育方式、家长是否严厉有关,而这与生活质量没有太大关系,但是,环境也会造就人的性格,这点有影响。
4. 比较贫困的生活会给人的独立性和能力培养带来什么好处?带来什么问题?请举例说明。
回答: 因为这些人的父母给予他们物质上的帮助比较少,也没有条件获得更好的工具帮助他们学习更有效率,因此他们只能依靠自己,如半工半读,同时也比别人更加努力
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作文
The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
Will luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals?It is true that modern life has some negative effect on the formation of people's strong and independent characteristic.However,since there are no less strong and independent individuals in comtemporary life than that in the past,we can not come to the conclusion that luxuries and conveniences will prevent people from becoming strong.
People who agree with the opinion may consider the fact that students in rural areas often appear more independent and tough than those live in cities as the evidence to support their idea.Admittedly,because in the rural areas where there are less modern technological innovations accessible to the students ,they tend to concentrate more attention on their studies.Also,because their parents are always busy with farm work,they have to develop the ability of taking care of themselves,even their younger sisters.What's more,they may face more difficulties in their growth since they are born with less oppotunities and only by working harder than others can they achieve their goals.Though these views are true,they just overlook the advantages of luxuries and conveniences in developing people's characteristic.
Firstly,because of the convenient tools in helping students' study and employees' work,the competition in contemporary life become increasing severe.Since these instrument narrow the gap of people's abilities.For example,people who are good at calculating may stand out in rural areas,where they can only rely on themselves to do calculation.In contrast,in cities,because of the proliferation of calculators and computers helping with repeating works,no one cares if you can perform excellent in calculation.
Sencondly,as the improvement in technology,children in modern life have to face more lures than children in the past or in rural areas.Computers games,TV sets as well as playboys are all intent to abstract children's attention from study.Also,with the proliferation of media and information,there are images and films of violation and pornography,which is serious test to children.Only children with strong characteristic and the ability to distinguish between right and wrong can avoid making serious mistakes.
Finally,because the conveniences technology brings to contemporary life,it is more accessible to know celebraties' experience of being successible.A great number of students and adults can buy books of celebraties or watching their interviews on TV or online.By communicating with their sole and great characteristic,it is more likely that people will develop strong and independent individuals by following them.
In sum,every coin has two sides.Luxuries and conveniences bring us both advantages and disadvantages in the formation of our strong and independent characteristics.Whether contempory life has positive effects in our characteristics is only determined by how we make use of these luxuries and conveniences.
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