GRE 作文题目
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Some people believe that in order to thrive, a society must put its own overall success before the well-being of its individual citizens. Others believe that the well-being of a society can only be measured by the general welfare of all its people. [Specific Task Instruction: Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.]
题目分析
翻译
一些人认为,如果一个社会要繁荣,它必须在人民的个人生活富裕之前先获得整体的进步。 另一些人认为,社会的整体进步只能由其全民福利来衡量。[说明:写一篇文章,讨论哪一个观点更加接近你自己的观点,并解释你选择这个观点的理由。在展开和支持你的观点时,你需要处理上面提到的两个观点]
指导
本题改编自老GRE的ISSUE19"If a society is to thrive, it must put its own overall success before the wellbeing of its individual citizens"。这是一个讨论社会和社会成员在社会繁荣和进步问题上关系的话题,实际上就是讨论“国富”和“民强”之间的关系。你可以认为“国富”造就了“民强”,也可以认为因为“民强”所以“国富”。需要提醒的是,无论选择什么观点,都需要阐述清楚“为什么”,而不能只描述一些现象。
1. 一个社会获得整体繁荣的表现有哪些?请举例说明。
回答:
福利状况,失业率,财政状况,军事力量,基础设施建设,科技
2. 一个社会的人民生活安康富裕的表现有哪些?请举例说明。
回答:
经济的富足,幸福感 ,精神文化生活丰富,医疗有保障。道德意识强
3. 如果一个社会整体实现了进步和繁荣,它的公民是否一定会富裕?为什么?请举例说明。
回答:
不会,一个阶级压迫的社会,99%财富掌握在1%的人手中的社会,一个贫富差距的社会,一个封建主义社会,精神文明及其匮乏的社会。一个奴隶制社会,整体的繁重建立在一部分人的水深火热中的社会。
4. 如果一个社会并不太发达,但是人民生活安定富裕,这对于整个社会的繁荣会带来什么好处?会有什么负面作用?请举例说明。
回答:
人民安定富裕,内部环境好,很容易繁荣,但不发达容易受外部环境影响,比如经融危机
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作文
Happiness
is always major concern for most people in every country. When talk about welfare
or happiness, thinking that a successful society is the cornerstone of
individual well-being, some people believe that in order to thrive, a society
must put its own overall success before the well-being of its individual
citizens. In my view, the truth of the matter was quite different. The
well-being of a society can only be measured by the general welfare of its
entire people. A society with universal happiness of each person could easily
thrive, but a successful society which a few people suffering could hardly
ameliorate the situation. In addition, although a successful society could
frequently give people good infrastructure, insurance and public service, a
society without welfare of every people in life could not be regard as a truly
successful society.
It's very hard for people who are suffering in a thrive society to improving
their life. Usually, own overall success of society cannot ensure well-being of
every person. There always some people who are suffering at the bottom of the
society. Struggling of these people for better life is nearly hopeless. As the
amelioration of life of those people easily needs a little sacrifice of most
people who are living well, the society inclined to show an unwilling to
change. The policy close concerning life of people are mostly passed through
democratic vote, so the voice of suffering people is usually weak when they are
minority. In addition, superficial thrive of society could veil eyes of government.
Authorities in such a society always easily assume that general environment is
good so that problem is just a small case. The bottom people would continuously
suffer for such assumption. What's even worse is that the criminal rate would
rise when such situation continuous. Contradicts hid behind thriving of society
would push bottom people into corner. They could do nothing but robbing or
stealing. This make the own overall successful of the society ridiculous.
In contrast, thriving will happen without extra effort when general welfare of
all people realized in a society. In such a society, everyone is happiness and
have similar situation, so there will be little contradicts. When people have a
great number of common interests,there will be much smaller impedance in developing of
the society. As the development of the society makes all the people enjoy benefit
from developing, people will be happier and have suppress contradictions
further. Then a virtuous cycle advances welfare of society rapidly. In
addition, solidarity within result from the common interest and rare
contradicts can make the society survive more easy in harsh environment like
worldwide monetary crisis or negative international trade policy. All these characteristics
make the society flourish.
Admittedly, society could frequently give people good infrastructure, insurance
and public service which are vital to the well-being of people. However, that
could only make the life of people better but not resolve problems which are
fatal flaws in society development (like religious conflicting and economic
crisis). And, actually, one without welfare of every people could not be regard
as a truly successful society. For example, China government dedicated to
develop national economy and science in last several decades. As a result,
China has succeeded in many aspects. However, the widening gap between the rich
and the poor now has leads to many contradicts today. Even though the
infrastructure, insurance and public service in China have been the best in
history, the unrealized general welfare for all people make the society, in
effect, not well-being and impede the further development.
In conclusion, successful society could provide for people physical or mental
public service, however, only could the general welfare of its entire people
measure well-being of a society. The situation which a few people suffer in a
successful society could not be ameliorated in a short time but it is easy to
thrive for a society with universal happiness of each person.