TOEFL 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:dddns
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
题目分析
翻译
你是否同意只有挣钱多的人才是成功的这一观点?用具体原因和例子来支持你的观点。
指导
这个题目的题眼在于“只有”,所以你需要说明是不是只有挣钱多才算是成功,而不是讨论挣钱多算不算成功。注意两者的区别,选择自己的观点并给出具体论据。
1. 你认为什么样的人叫成功?举出你心目中的成功人士。
回答: 得到大众的认可(财富、地位、名誉、道德)并且自己的满意(自身价值的实现、不后悔)。
2. 挣钱多能够说明什么?
回答: 有经济头脑、会挣钱
3. 有没有人很有钱,但是你觉得他(她)很失败?详细说明一个具体的人物。
回答: 山西煤老板~~钱是工人们的血汗。
4. 你觉得什么是不能用财富衡量的?
回答: 对人类和社会做出的贡献——科学家们做出的贡献远远超过他们所得:袁隆平。 品德、幸福、成就感、才华。。。。。
其他用户的回答
作文
Nowadays, people increasingly equal personal wealth with succes. But can only rich people be called successful? In my opinion, generally speaking, rich people are success.
First and foremost, we must admit that the majority of rich people are successful. Alfred Nobel inventeed Dynamite and became a millionaire.  Bill Gates is famous for hs ability of improving on existing ideas and making the most use of them. Products such as MS-DOS and Windows operating systerm bought him a huge amont of money and even became the richest people in the world for many years. Steve Jobs, formed the Apple Omputer Company, designed and marketed wildly successful products, e.g. i-Mac and i-Pod, which saved the Apple Company from bankruptcy and earned lots of money. Andrew Carnege, one of the mont  influential American industrialists and philanthropists, famously commented, "The man who dies rich dies disgraced.“ These great people created tremendous wealth by eceptional creativeness, vision and courage. They are turely successful people.
On the other hand, there are many exceptions because many great men and women were poor. Vincent van Gogh, one of the most influencial painters and pioneer of Expressionism, sold only one painting in his life time and was impecunious for much of his life. Karl Marx, after being exiled from Germany , moved to London, making a living by contributing to magazines. It was for the support of Engles that Marx could continue his work. These people had lived in poverty not though their own fault but because of misfortune or social illnesses. They were also successful because of their great ideas and works.
In conclusion, there are many successful men who are rich. And exceptions do exist for there are famous people like Vincent van Gogh and Karl Marx. However, in most cases, successful people are rich.
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