TOEFL 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:forgo
Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
题目分析
翻译
有人认为成功来自于冒险和机会。有人认为成功来自于细心的准备。你认为成功来自什么?用具体的理由和例子来支持你的观点。
指导
题目列举了成功的两个原因,写文章时,除了可以用到这两个观点之外,还可以自己想成功的其它原因,比如持之以恒的毅力等,不要受题目限制了自己的思维。
1. 你有成功的经验吗?你觉得你的成功归功于什么?
回答: yes, i have the experience of the success. From of me, i think that the success dues to the risks and chances.What's more, we can not forget that the careful planning has a very important work.
2. 你觉得成功需要冒险和机会吗?举个例子。
回答: Yes, some people who want get a success need have the risks and chances.In my opinion, if we not have the chances of the success, we will not know how to success; if we not know have the risks, we will not go out the first, because if we do onething, we not know what will happen and what will happen in the next, so it need the people have the risks to go to success. For explome, in Chinese, if the students go to the universty, he or she need get the test of colledge enter test. So, we know the test give them a chance go to the university. What's more, the students are asked to apply the university after the test and they apply the university should base on the bank of the scores of the test, but they need apply the school before they know the scores of the test. So in that case,it need students have the risks to get the success.
3. 细心的准备对成功有何作用?比如?
回答: In chinses, it have a word that"the success is belong to the people who have an enough careful panning". Yes, i agree what it say. If you not have a great success before you do something, you will not have a aim to do something.For example of me, before when i was a child, i did the thing would not have a careful plan. So, when i begun do it, i don't know what i would do. If i had a diffcult that was not in the ranging of i think before i do it. Then, the more of the diffcult out of my expencettion, the more i did not want to do it. However, now, before when i do onething, i will have a very careful planning and i think it is right that the success is belong to the people having a very careful planning. The careful planning will help us consider someting what will happen when we do something and it will help us have a logical think to do anything.
4. 你认为还有哪些因素有益于成功?
回答: I think that the risks and chances are as important as the careful planning is.But does the success only belong to the risks or chances and a careful planning? My answer is not. There are some other thing help our success, such the help of other,hard woke, and the teach lead to. So, we should consider more things leading to success, not only consider the risks or chances and a careful planning.
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yes, i have the experience of the success. From of me, i think that the success dues to the risks and chances.What's more, we can not forget that the careful planning has a very important work.Yes, some people who want get a success need have the risks and chances.In my opinion, if we not have the chances of the success, we will not know how to success; if we not know have the risks, we will not go out the first, because if we do onething, we not know what will happen and what will happen in the next, so it need the people have the risks to go to success. For explome, in Chinese, if the students go to the universty, he or she need get the test of colledge enter test. So, we know the test give them a chance go to the university. What's more, the students are asked to apply the university after the test and they apply the university should base on the bank of the scores of the test, but they need apply the school before they know the scores of the test. So in that case,it need students have the risks to get the success.  In chinses, it have a word that"the success is belong to the people who have an enough careful panning". Yes, i agree what it say. If you not have a great success before you do something, you will not have a aim to do something.For example of me, before when i was a child, i did the thing would not have a careful plan. So, when i begun do it, i don't know what i would do. If i had a diffcult that was not in the ranging of i think before i do it. Then, the more of the diffcult out of my expencettion, the more i did not want to do it. However, now, before when i do onething, i will have a very careful planning and i think it is right that the success is belong to the people having a very careful planning. The careful planning will help us consider someting what will happen when we do something and it will help us have a logical think to do anything.I think that the risks and chances are as important as the careful planning is.But does the success only belong to the risks or chances and a careful planning? My answer is not. There are some other thing help our success, such the help of other,hard woke, and the teach lead to. So, we should consider more things leading to success, not only consider the risks or chances and a careful planning. 
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