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People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making. [Specific Task Instruction: Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.]
题目分析
翻译
人们的行为很大程度上是由自己不能驾驭的力量决定的。[说明:写一篇文章,讨论你同意或反对这个说法达到什么程度,并解释你选择这个观点的理由。在展开和支持你的观点时,你需要考虑这个说法可能在哪些方面成立或者不成立,并解释你所考虑的这些东西如何体现你的观点]
指导
本题讨论对个人行为负责相关的问题,题目认为个人行为并非是自己可以决定的,更多得是被外界左右。本题改编自老GRE的ISSUE93"The concept of 'individual responsibility' is a necessary fiction. Although societies must hold individuals accountable for their own actions, people's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making",和老GRE的ISSUE156"Choice is an illusion. In reality, our lives are controlled by the society in which we live"有互通之处。在分析的过程中,可以从个人责任的意义以及是否必要,影响个人行为的因素,外界对个人行为的影响方面和具体形式、程度等方面展开思考。
1. 如果不存在“个人责任”这个概念,人们的学习、工作、生活以及整个社会的发展都会出现哪些问题?请举例并简述。
回答: 一个人没有个人责任,1那么身边的人就会觉得这个人不可靠,并产生不良影响。比如孩子的父母,如果答应孩子在节假日带孩子去游乐园玩,那么在节假日的时候应该推掉那些不是由不可逆因素造成的事件,没有为孩子们做好榜样,让孩子们慢慢成为失信于别人的人。如果实在无法推脱,也不会向孩子解释清楚并请求原谅。举人例。2那么他在工作的时候不会十分注意细节,并且对一些可能导致他所工作的项目出现巨大问题,并给公司带来难以故意的损失。公司可能因为这样一个项目的失败失信于其他的客户,甚至可能出现破产危机。3那么对社会而言,他可能很难起到积极作用。在公共场所肆意妄为,随心所欲,比如破换环境或公共设施,为社会工作者带来不小麻烦。
2. 让个人为自己的行为负责对于社会有哪些好处?请举例并简述。
回答: 1赢得他人的好感,受到别人的尊重。 2为他人树立积极向上的榜样。 准备第一次去犯罪的人考虑到自己的责任,比如身为父母,考虑到自己的不端行为,可能给孩子带来的心里方面的负面影响。或身为子女,考虑到如果被抓,自己的父母无人照顾。等等。他就会消除犯罪的想法
3. 人们的行为都受到哪些因素的影响?请举例并简述。(可从内因、外因两方面分别考虑)
回答: 内:恐惧,贪婪,淫欲,愤怒,爱恋。官员由于贪婪,不断的利用权力为自己谋求利益。 外:不可控制的物理伤害,地震火灾等等。地震中幸存下来的人可能身体残疾,使得他们心理产生畸变,比如仇视正常人。
4. 外界因素在哪些情况下以何种方式影响着人们的行为?请举例并简述。
回答: 墨守成规的一种社会道德和健全的法律,比如赡养老人,照顾弱势群体。谴责那些恶劣对待自己父母的人。谴责并依法处理欺压弱势群体的人。
5. 人们是否可以不顾外界环境的影响而进行自己的选择?如果可以,请举例;如果不可以,请解释原因。
回答: 不可以,任何一种行为都是经过选择的。一个人被车撞倒流血不止,救与不救都是经过了选择。救,可能是出于挽救一条生命的想法。不救可能是因为大量流血导致人们害怕,想救而不敢救。
其他用户的回答
作文
I agree with the speaker's broad assertion that people's behavior is determinated by forces. However, the speaker's negligent about people's own making is unjustifiable. One's behavior is dominated by aspects such as lust, love, greed, fear, rage and irreversible accidents such as flood, earthquake. My points of this contention with the speaker involve the fundamental objectives.I concede that the speaker is on the correct philosophical side of this issue. After all, behavior is the reflection of the forces for immediate action to questions.  Behavior is not entirely driven by forces. Consider also less egregious examples, such as He Shen's withholding the information about his active role in embezzlement in ancient China government. His behavior demonstrated a concern of self-interest above the broader interests of the government that granted his political authority in the first place.Responsibility which is rssponsible for people' behavior seems to be the litmus test for society today. Grade-schoolers are learning skills right along with watching and simulating. Parents  Although, forces are also the chief means by which we humans attempt to avoid our inner world that our frailities-emotions and motives such as rage, greed, fear, lust, love-may be a very fixed assortment, but they share at least one immediate quality: we are, as we say, in the grip of them.
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