TOEFL 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:afra_384
What change would make your hometown more appealing to people your age? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
题目分析
翻译
怎样才能使家乡更吸引你这个年龄段的人?用具体的理由和例子来支持你的观点。
指导
首先想想你这个年龄段的人共享的文化氛围和追求的潮流趋势,再结合家乡目前的特点,总结出要改进的地方。
1. 你同龄人阶层普遍的喜好是什么?
回答: 购物、读书、旅行。
2. 你家乡有什么特点?符合你同龄人的口味吗?
回答: 购物场所足够,但是可以读书的地方不多,周边可提供的短期出游的地方也比较有限。
3. 你对家乡的建设有什么建议?
回答: 多建设一些可以学习交流的文化场所,比如图书馆,咖啡厅,书吧等等,同时开发周边的特色旅游项目。
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作文
The people in my age-20 years old young people-is the rising sunshine, can bring energy and vitality to others. It is significant to appeal young people to my hometown, for they are the primary power to build this city, the main catalyst to change the circumstance around us, and the stable resource to creat originality. To achieve this end, there are two means which can make my hometown more attractive should be done. Developing the cultural production and cultural facility is the first means to appeal the concentration of the people in my age. It appears that the young people focus on the spiritual  growth when comparing with the old generation. The young generation spend more money on their cultural life, for example,a amount of young choose to go to a concert on their leisure time for they can obtainr spiritual enjoyment according to popular culture.So enhance the cultural building can grab the sight of young generation terrible.The second means,exploiting the tourism resource,is more unlimited than the first one for this approach is nearly suitable for all young people in various class.The young generation pretend to treat the tourism as a common part of their life.Use a common phenonmeno as an example , a great member of young generation choose to travel around in their gap year.These concept is affect so many youth that many of them will be arrested by the elaborately design of short-line travel in or around the metropolis.However, these two methods which mentioned in the preceding part of the passage are still limited, and there may have more solution to appeal the young people to my hometown. But these two means can elinimate many clog that arrest the migratation of young to my hometown effectively, and make approach to the final end availably.
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