TOEFL 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:luckywfl
【IBT机经-1】Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: In order to succeed, you should be more like others than be different from everyone else.
题目分析
翻译
你是否同意下述观点:为了成功,你更应该变得和其他人一样而不是与众不同。
指导
题目讨论为了成功应该怎样做的问题。题目中的前提条件是“获得成功“,给出了”如果人们变得和其他人相似就会取得成功“的判断。题目不难理解,和成功有关的实例也不胜枚举,分析题目和拓展写作思路时应该注意以下2点:1、明确自己的观点,到底是同意还是不同意;2、论述中要始终和”获得成功“与”自己和他人的关系“相关联,切忌脱离了题目的前提是”获得成功“。
1. 在我们的日常生活和社会历史中,获得成功的人都应该具备那些素质?这些成功人士是和其他人一样呢还是与众不同呢?请结合实例简述。
回答: In the history of mankind and in our daily life,some basic qualities such as creativity,diligence,responsibility and cooperation are crucial for a people to achieve success. The people who are successful are different from others in many ways ,especially in creative and innovative spirite. Take Ma Yun for example, he is the first person to take advantage of internet for selling good and creates the Alibaba and becomes the richest person in China.
2. 成功人士的身上,哪些特点是具有普遍性的?那些特质是具有特殊性的?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: Diligence,creativity and brevery are common qualities for successful people, while some other successful people obtain other characters such as communication skills. Ma Yun can communicate with other CEO very well, which helps him to get the first and the most important supporting funds for his business.
3. 变得和大家相似会出现哪些结果?在什么情况下有助于成功?什么情况下不利于成功?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: If you are more like others,your strong aspects in your personality are not obvious from other people. As we all know, you are talent in a field,while there are still other people who are more talent than in such field. Thus,being similar with others will not promote your success. Only you are different from others, can you make an innovative breakthrough. Under such circumstance, you can find a new way to succeed. However, if you follow other people's path,of course you will not make the new changes which bring some new interests for people.
4. 变得和大家不同有哪些结果?在什么情况下有利于成功?什么情况下不利于成功?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: If you are diffeent from other people, your strong and weak points in your personality will become so obverious.If you can take your strong point to develop your business, it will benefit your business and help you to achieve success. However, if you are so different from the common people, and you can not devote such difference into your business to achieve some good result beyond imagination, of course, maybe you will be considered as a crazy people.
5. 变得和他人一样也好,不一样也罢,对成功究竟能起到多大的作用?为了获得成功,除了题目中涉及的那方面问题,还需要那些优秀的品质呢?请结合实例简述。
回答: No matter you are like other people or different from others,achieving success needs to obtain some other excellent qualities, such as hard working,sociable skills and forsight into the future. Take Ma Yun for example,he is like other people in daily life, while he is so different from others in way that he deals with his business.
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作文
          As the news breaks out that Ma Yun becomes the richest person in China, it arouses a hot disscussion about the topic "In order to achieve success, you should be more like others or be more different from others." Form my own aspect, being more different from other people is more helpful for a people to achieve success through most people are like other people in common ways. First,being different can help you to take advantage of your strong points and avoid your weak points in your personality. In the history of mankind and in our daily life,some basic qualities such as creativity,diligence,responsibility and cooperation are crucial for a people to achieve success. The people who are successful are different from others in many ways ,especially in creative and innovative spirite. Take Ma Yun for example, he is the first person to take advantage of internet for selling goods and creates the Alibaba and becomes the richest person in China. If you are different from other people, your strong and weak points in your personality will become so obverious.If you can take your strong point to develop your business, it will benefit your business and help you to achieve success. Of course,if you are so different from the common people, and you can not devote such difference into your business to achieve some good result beyond imagination, maybe you will be considered as a crazy people.Second, being different from others means that you should obtain some other characters that other people don't have, which helps you to look at the world in a differnt way. Diligence,creativity and bravery are common qualities for successful people, while some  successful people obtain other characters such as communication skills. Ma Yun can communicate with other CEO very well, which helps him to get the first and the most important supporting funds for his business. Last, no matter you are like other people or different from others,achieving success needs to obtain some other excellent qualities, such as hard working,sociable skills and forsight into the future. Take Ma Yun for example,he is like other people in daily life, while he is so different from others in way that he deals with his business.For most people, we are like other people in many ways because the social disciplines and cultural customs that we are living in, which are necessary for us to grow up healthily. However, If every people is like other peole, the world we are living in will become grey and dull, the society will not make more progress. Thus, being different is the way to present your different personality,to help you to find the new things in our life and deal with problems in different way, which are basic qualities for a person's success.
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