GRE 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:丛明
How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society.
题目分析
翻译
孩子们对社会的适应程度决定了社会的命运。很不幸的是,我们还没有学会如何培养能帮助我们让社会变得更好的孩子。
指导
本题隐含了一个前提,即孩子们适应社会的能力越高,社会就会发展得越好。因此,题目的后半句可以理解为“我们现在还不知道如何培养孩子更好地适应社会(,所以,社会不会发展的更好)”。题目可以切入的角度有两个:一是孩子们对社会的适应能力是否能决定社会的发展,二是我们是否知道如何培养孩子更好地适应社会,从而让社会发展得更好。
1. 孩子们适应社会的能力强(或弱)表现在哪些方面?请举例说明。
回答: 1.自己解决困难的能力,遇到难题是否退却 2.照顾自己的能力,远离亲人是否能够照顾好自己 3.与人相处的能力,与身边的同学相处情况。 4.规划自己的能力,是否能够根据情况规划自己的发展.
2. 社会发展会受到哪些重要因素的影响?这些因素哪些是和孩子们适应社会的能力有关的?请举例说明。
回答: 1.经济 2.创造力,爱因斯坦,爱迪生,独立思考,解决问题 3.公民素质 4.政府决策,孩子能力越强,两者随之提高,
3. 适应社会能力强(或弱)的孩子会对社会做出什么贡献?会给社会带来什么麻烦?请举例说明。
回答: 有创造力,推进科技;有远见,规划发展;解决问题,提高社会效率; 恶意竞争,反社会,高智商犯罪.
4. 我们有哪些具体的手段和方法来培养孩子适应社会?这些手段和方法在现代社会中被执行的情况如何?为什么会出现这种情况?请举例说明。
回答: 素质话教育,素质课程,混合式教学. 不好,应试话教育,高压教学,扼杀创造力.
5. 哪些因素会制约我们对孩子适应社会能力的培养?请举例说明。
回答: 传统的观点,保守的思想,不良社会风气.
其他用户的回答
作文
Lots of things need to be done to guarantee a machine to work well. Not only must every gear be in good condition, but also they have to cooperate with each other. Accordingly, to make a society better off, lots of factors need to be considered. The statement raises a serial of problems including education, cooperation, and so on. From my perspective, although socialized children can bring society great benefit, they are not sufficient for a better society.
 
To begin with, a notion of socialized children includes varied respects, such as cooperation, critical thinking and so on. According to common sense, children with such characteristics can contribute a lot to society. First of all, Cooperation measures a person's ability to work with others, share information in attaining a final goal. In modern society, with influx of information, it is merely impossible for a person to gather all information he needs- let alone to use them in achieving a final goal. Thus, socialized children who know how to cooperate with others can integrate different parts in a group or adjust jobs between different groups to get work done in the progress of achieving the final goal. Secondly, children with the ability of critical thinking can correct our mistakes and improve our society. From Harvey's theory of circulation of blood to Copernicus's discovery of the heliocentric ordering of the planets, historical stories tell us the functional role critical thinking- in other word, socialized children who have the ability- has in finding and correcting mistakes and improving the society. Admittedly, socialized children are qualified to improve our society.
 
However, as complex a society system is, there are also varied of other elements that influence the advancement of society. Such elements, including government policy, market condition, and international situation, sometimes have a more basic role in social improvement because children even well socialized children are still too young to influence the direction of society. One compelling example is the so-called" Star Wars" defense initiative operated in America during 1980s.  According to the projection, rather than addressing the instant problem, such as low literacy rate, poor social welfare and so on, the government decided to pour millions of dollars into weapon manufacturing needed for the so-called coming star wars. At the end of the plan, however, there is no star war, but a society full of violence, crime and disease. At the same time, socialized or would-be socialized children either go bad, which caused the society even more problem, or just leaving things aside without the ability to change.
 
Moreover, how to raise socialized children is still a complex question for us. Nowadays, schools tend to treat children as goods, which are needed by the market-in other word, society. Children have been forced to the ocean of knowledge under a very high pressure. Rather than thinking of things in original ways, they are forced to certain ways used by their predecessors. Their ability of critical thinking has been disencouraged to a great extent. What’s more, under a competitive system with high pressure, there is no fundament for cooperation. They regard their peers as enemies, they spare no efforts to beat others in the progress of advancement, sometimes even with a cost of compromise of their moral standard- let alone they will work with others and share their scarce information. 
 
In sum, although socialized children can bring benefits to our society, they are not sufficient to achieve this goal. Moreover, with the problem in raising socialized children, on one hand, we should do whatever we can to raise socialized children, on the other hand, other factors must be taken into consideration to make our society a better place.
 
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