GRE 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:Alice_918
The study of history places too much emphasis on individuals. The most significant events and trends in history were made possible not by the famous few, but by groups of people whose identities have long been forgotten.
题目分析
翻译
历史研究过度强调了个人的作用。最重大的历史事件和历史趋势可能不是少数几个人造就的,而是由许许多多其身份早已经被忘记的人们造就的。
指导
本题讨论历史研究重点以及重大历史事件创造者归属的问题,题目认为历史研究过多强调个人而忽视了大众。这种类型的题目对前后两部可以持有不同的看法,可能的论点总是花样层出不穷。虽然可以写的内容多,但是也正因为内容多了,各部分之间的衔接就显得格外重要。在分析的时候需要注意“历史研究”以及“最重大的历史事件和趋势”这两个关键词。而且题目讨论的是“许许多多其身份早已经被忘记的人们”,需要注意这并非是“人民大众”的概念可以完全替代的。
1. 你印象中的重大历史事件有哪些?这些事件中有哪些人给你的印象特别深刻?他们都起到了怎样的作用?请举例并简述。
回答: 911,香港回归,申奥成功。民众,邓小平。
2. 历史研究是否过度强调个人的作用?如果是,是什么原因导致的?会有什么后果?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: 是。这些人往往在历史事件中扮演着关键的角色,他们的决定和行为影响着事件的进展。夸大一个人的功劳或过失。
3. forgotten groups是否直接或者间接参与了创造历史的进程?如果forgotten groups参与了创造历史的进程,那么对于这些事关历史进程中的重大事件,在哪些方面他们的贡献比较突出?贡献程度如何?可结合具体事例简述。
回答: 是。他们是实质性推动历史的进程,没有他们的努力就没有历史。比如香港回归中负责谈判的各方代表。
4. Famous few对历史有哪些直接或者间接的影响?他们对于这些事关历史进程中的重大事件,在哪些方面他们的贡献比较突出?贡献程度如何?可结合具体事例简述。
回答: 他们的判断,决定,和行动。历史的发生,走向。
5. forgotten groups和famous few之间的存在着什么关系?
回答: famous group指引着forgotten groups去创造改变历史。没有forgotton group,也就没有famous group的历史成就。
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作文
  From the contention of speaker people put too much attention on the individual feat. As a matter of fact, the forgotten group’s contribution may promote the whole history or determine the trend. I fundamentally agree with the speaker, after all without others help or support a few of people can hardly propel the history forward.
  The groups of people whose identities have long been forgotten may mostly owning to their contribution is under the surface. Nevertheless, their effort provides the possibility for the latter significant history event. One apt illustration to this point involved in the first abroad student Rong,hong who strived for the chance to let children study abroad after he back to the country. Whereas, when people mention this period of history, “liumeiyoutong” is resound in people’s mind but not a name of Rong, hong who lead the children come to American. Without Rong,hong’s effort, China would lose a group of elite whose contribution affect the whole country in the latter time. Another forgotten people are point to the populace. Their effort and contribution create the history. They are the people who accomplish the history task with hand and life defending their territory and ideal. Without populace identify, every contention of the famous few is just a words, let alone the attempt to change the society.
  The famous few on the other hand affect the whole history events. Their notion and behavior create the history. Without these people the history will be rewrite. The forgotten group's effort will eliminate. Without the Martin Luther King associate the whole black people, the government would not be abandon the discrimination rule and policy. Without Deng Xiao Ping Hong Kong would not back to China. Even the forgotten group may influence the famous few, but in the end it's the famous few who determine the history trend and who lead the history.
  The speaker is failed to see the relationship between the two groups of people. Emphasizing any group will lead to deviate the correct road. We cannot deny the contribution from the famous few, at the same time we should realize the effort of forgotten people. Without both people's effort the history will not happen. Treating the history with an objective view, one person cannot own the strength to create a history alone. For that matter we should strike a balance in judging those people.
  In the final analyze, people should avoid appraising a history people exaggeratedly base on the records. We should put our sight in a higher position, not to be distorted by the passive record and other people's judgment. No one can deny the famous people's contribution, but not everyone can see the forgotten people's effort. The critical thing we should do is to hold the relationship between the famous few and forgotten people
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