TOEFL 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:maomaoyu
【IBT机经-1】Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: In order to succeed, you should be more like others than be different from everyone else.
题目分析
翻译
你是否同意下述观点:为了成功,你更应该变得和其他人一样而不是与众不同。
指导
题目讨论为了成功应该怎样做的问题。题目中的前提条件是“获得成功“,给出了”如果人们变得和其他人相似就会取得成功“的判断。题目不难理解,和成功有关的实例也不胜枚举,分析题目和拓展写作思路时应该注意以下2点:1、明确自己的观点,到底是同意还是不同意;2、论述中要始终和”获得成功“与”自己和他人的关系“相关联,切忌脱离了题目的前提是”获得成功“。
1. 在我们的日常生活和社会历史中,获得成功的人都应该具备那些素质?这些成功人士是和其他人一样呢还是与众不同呢?请结合实例简述。
回答: Those successful people are always passionate, determined and persistent, all of which make them different than the others. I have a friend, he was born in a poor family but had strong will to be admitted to the Ivy League. He enjoyed scientific research very much and the Ivy League colleges can provide the best environment. As a Chinese, he studied English day and night and prepare himself for basic experimental knowledge, so two years later, he finally made it and get the ticket to Yale.
2. 成功人士的身上,哪些特点是具有普遍性的?那些特质是具有特殊性的?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: common: passionate, determined, persistent special: optimistic, intelligent, interest, rich family background, supports from friends, harmonious social environment Born in a poor family, my friend Jeremy couldn't afford to study in an established high school, but he never gave up hardworking and was extremely keen on knowledge. He even spent a large quantity of time preparing for the SAT tests. As the president of the Students' Union, he organized lots of activities and served as a volunteer in his community, which made him quite popular. His kindness and optimism finally earned him praises and supports from friends and neighbors. All of these seemed to be connected to his success of getting in Yale.
3. 变得和大家相似会出现哪些结果?在什么情况下有助于成功?什么情况下不利于成功?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: disadvantages: ordinary, dependent, lazy, unwilling to take challenges advantages: supports and understandings from each other; sharing experiences, knowledge and feelings; supervising and helping each other Take me for example, I prepared for TOEFL with some of my friends, and we stuck together and comforted each other whenever meeting obstacles. It was the continuous supports and understandings that helped me make through the difficult time during my English-studying journey. Besides, we shared our problems and mistakes and discussed every night, which was very beneficial. Last but not the least, supervision provided by the group was of significant necessity, assisting us in overcoming our laziness. I do recognize the dependence and unwillingness to take challenges in group study, but compared with its huge advantages, these can be overcome and omitted.
4. 变得和大家不同有哪些结果?在什么情况下有利于成功?什么情况下不利于成功?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: disadvantages: lonely, anxious, stressful advantages: free, independent, self-disciplined, flexible Take me for example, I prefer to study on my own. On one hand, I can make schedules more flexibly and freely. Regardless of other people's affairs, high on my agenda is always the most important thing for me. On the other hand, learning alone teaches me independence and self-discipline, making me ready for the future oversea studies. Though disadvantages of feeling lonely and sometimes stressful and anxious do exit, its advantages are definitely superior to the drawbacks.
5. 变得和他人一样也好,不一样也罢,对成功究竟能起到多大的作用?为了获得成功,除了题目中涉及的那方面问题,还需要那些优秀的品质呢?请结合实例简述。
回答: Whether being different from the others is not a crucial question to be successful. What matters is the specialties of passion, determination and persistence.
其他用户的回答
作文
  In a fast-developing society, everyone wants to succeed. Though the definition of success varies form person to person, how to become successful and whether we should be different from the others remain under discussion. I think individual specialties are of importance when it comes to succeed, which means we should be distinctive from the others.  Successful people are always passionate which can't be found in the vast majority of people.Success means doing something better than others, so in order to achieve it, we must first be passionate. Since interest is the best teacher, only with great passion can we dedicate our heart and soul to carrying out a career.Many great scientists make great breakthroughs on the foundation of passion. Take Albert Einstein for example, if he wasn't keen on physics, would he become such notable physician all over the world? Of course not!  Determination is another key factor contributed to succeeding. We acknowledge that determination is a characteristic most of us don't have. Without determination, people may just give up when meeting obstacles and becoming lazy.Born in a poor family, my friend Jeremy dreamed of getting the scholarship so as to study in an Ivy League college and he had strong will to make it true. He studied day and night to get top scores and worked as a volunteer in his community to rich his experiences. Besides, he was also the president of the Students' Union, thus absorbing lots of communication skills. Difficulties though he met, whenever he thought of his original dream , he just carried on. Finally he made it and was admitted into Yale.  This is an example of success with determination.  Last but not the least, persistence works as a foundation to success.Persist people never stop. Once setting up the goal, he or she just keeps chasing it. Persistence is to success what bricks are to a house. It is basic and most important. Take J.K. Rowling as an example. She was once refused by publishers 12 times, but she didn't give up. She revised her script hundreds of times, and without her insistence, there would be no Harry Potter.  Though being the same with others do have some advantages such as supports and understandings from each other, the disadvantages of depending on each other and making excuses of laziness have dwarfed the advantages.In conclusion, I hold firm that being different from others and having distinctive characteristics are extremely important values that are needed to be successful. 
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