TOEFL 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:miss_az
【IBT机经-1】Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: In order to succeed, you should be more like others than be different from everyone else.
题目分析
翻译
你是否同意下述观点:为了成功,你更应该变得和其他人一样而不是与众不同。
指导
题目讨论为了成功应该怎样做的问题。题目中的前提条件是“获得成功“,给出了”如果人们变得和其他人相似就会取得成功“的判断。题目不难理解,和成功有关的实例也不胜枚举,分析题目和拓展写作思路时应该注意以下2点:1、明确自己的观点,到底是同意还是不同意;2、论述中要始终和”获得成功“与”自己和他人的关系“相关联,切忌脱离了题目的前提是”获得成功“。
1. 在我们的日常生活和社会历史中,获得成功的人都应该具备那些素质?这些成功人士是和其他人一样呢还是与众不同呢?请结合实例简述。
回答: 坚持,创新,努力,坚定。大部分普通人做不到这几点。
2. 成功人士的身上,哪些特点是具有普遍性的?那些特质是具有特殊性的?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: 创新意识。(邓小平中国改革开放reform and opening-up) 坚持自己的想法,不被别人所影响。gas lamp -- Edison 电灯 做普通人不敢做的事情。(乔布斯退学,上学得不到任何帮助却花了父母所有的积蓄)
3. 变得和大家相似会出现哪些结果?在什么情况下有助于成功?什么情况下不利于成功?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: 普通平庸,不利于成功。
4. 变得和大家不同有哪些结果?在什么情况下有利于成功?什么情况下不利于成功?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: 世界就是由各式各样的物体组成,更是各样的人更是可以为世界带了更多的惊喜。
5. 变得和他人一样也好,不一样也罢,对成功究竟能起到多大的作用?为了获得成功,除了题目中涉及的那方面问题,还需要那些优秀的品质呢?请结合实例简述。
回答: 如果每个人都一样,世界无法发展。除了与众不同,还需要知道自己需要干什么并且走在正确的道路上。
其他用户的回答
作文
        The world is built with variety people just as a building is built with variety materials. Some people want to be an ordinary person and do what others people do. The others prefer to do themselves, try new things and do not care what the others think. However, the later one always is the successful people who change the world, invent new things and have a happy life. In order to be succeed, people, therefore, should not be more like others because the successful people always have different opinions, persist their believes and do what others afraid to do.        First of all, having a different opinion with ordinary people is the most important thing of a successful people. Before 1978, China was a country that did not contact with other countries, and Chinese people lived in poverty. However, Deng Xiaoping, the leader of China in that period, started to reverse the trend in 1978. He proposed a great policy which is reform and opening up to help people realize the whole world. After that, China started to trade with other countries, and Chinese people's lives were getting better. It is because Deng had a different opinion about how to make a better China, and he changed the China.        Following that, persisting what you believe functions as guide of success. Edison invented the electric light, and that is the most important invention in human history. However, before the successful experiment, Edison did thousandfold experiment. Maybe there have other people also tried to invent electric light, but persistence makes Edison success, and he became the most important inventor in the word.        Finally, doing what the others afraid to do is a way to get success. The majority people in the world do them do not want to do everyday because they live in other's opinions. People think attend an university is a good way to get success, and then a lot of people want to go to an university and get a degree whatever they need or not. However, Steven Jobs, the most successful people in the world, gave up his degree when he attended an university. He realized that university could not help him anything, and the cost was so high. Therefore, he decided drop out and created his own business. After that, he changed the world and became the most successful person. If he lived like a normal person who finished his class in the university and got a normal job in the end, we would never get iPhone and iPad.        In conclusion, based on the discussions demonstrated above, it can be clearly seen that success is not as so hard as we might suppose. All of the three successful people were not like others. They did what they wanted to and did not influence by others. It is precisely because the different, they got succeed in the end. People, therefore, do not care about others' lives, opinions and ideas. Just live their different lives, they will get success and what they want to get. 
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