TOEFL 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:Kassyice
【IBT机经-1】Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: In order to succeed, you should be more like others than be different from everyone else.
题目分析
翻译
你是否同意下述观点:为了成功,你更应该变得和其他人一样而不是与众不同。
指导
题目讨论为了成功应该怎样做的问题。题目中的前提条件是“获得成功“,给出了”如果人们变得和其他人相似就会取得成功“的判断。题目不难理解,和成功有关的实例也不胜枚举,分析题目和拓展写作思路时应该注意以下2点:1、明确自己的观点,到底是同意还是不同意;2、论述中要始终和”获得成功“与”自己和他人的关系“相关联,切忌脱离了题目的前提是”获得成功“。
1. 在我们的日常生活和社会历史中,获得成功的人都应该具备那些素质?这些成功人士是和其他人一样呢还是与众不同呢?请结合实例简述。
回答: I don't agree with the statement since I think one should at least be different from others in two aspects to achieve success. The first and most important is persistence. One need to be more persistent than others to get accomplishments. For instance, when I was in high school, almost all of my classmates have the dream to go to a top university. But many just dreamed all day long while I was always diligent. Thus I made my dream come true. The second point is, there would be more chances to succeed if you have a monopoly, as Peter Thiel said, especially to an entrepreneur. When one thinks of a promising idea that has never been applied in a market by others, then it's more likely for the person to succeed by entering into the blue sea.
2. 成功人士的身上,哪些特点是具有普遍性的?那些特质是具有特殊性的?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: General characteristics of successful persons include but not limited to self-confidence, persistence, love of thinking, embracing change, while there are also specific traits for some. For example, Steve Jobs had always been introvert, which was not regarded as an advantage generally but had brought more time for him to think about his products and make them perfect.
3. 变得和大家相似会出现哪些结果?在什么情况下有助于成功?什么情况下不利于成功?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: What if we become more like others? On the one hand, it would be beneficial to learn about the general characteristics of the successful persons and make them your own ones. Take myself for example. Last year, I had a chance to take part in a design project by Audi company. I was hesitating and wondering if I was competent enough when my friend, who's about the same level as me, applied for project and finally got admitted. Things could have been different if I had the same confidence. And obstacles would no longer be the excuse in our way so that success comes more easily. On the other hand, if we just stay in the comfortable state like most people do and don't intend to improve ourselves or even don't have the confidence of doing so, we would always in the same place and success would never come. All in all, we need to be selective when learning from others so as to succeed.
4. 变得和大家不同有哪些结果?在什么情况下有利于成功?什么情况下不利于成功?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: What if we are just different from others? In one aspect, being more pioneering in a promising area than others would make us approach success. Let's look at Adora, the girl who got the venture from YC by establishing the US household service online. She has already achieved a great success. Just as Thiel says, to take a monopoly would build up absolute competitive advantages. And Adora has taken the leading step and built her monopoly in that market. In another, we should sometimes keep consistence with others since there could be disadvantages if we do contrarily, especially inside a team. When a team has already reached consensus to carry out a solution, it would be hard and even harmful for you to act by yourself and keep different processes from others.
5. 变得和他人一样也好,不一样也罢,对成功究竟能起到多大的作用?为了获得成功,除了题目中涉及的那方面问题,还需要那些优秀的品质呢?请结合实例简述。
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