GRE 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:刘旸
Some people believe that in order to thrive, a society must put its own overall success before the well-being of its individual citizens. Others believe that the well-being of a society can only be measured by the general welfare of all its people. [Specific Task Instruction: Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.]
题目分析
翻译
一些人认为,如果一个社会要繁荣,它必须在人民的个人生活富裕之前先获得整体的进步。 另一些人认为,社会的整体进步只能由其全民福利来衡量。[说明:写一篇文章,讨论哪一个观点更加接近你自己的观点,并解释你选择这个观点的理由。在展开和支持你的观点时,你需要处理上面提到的两个观点]
指导
本题改编自老GRE的ISSUE19"If a society is to thrive, it must put its own overall success before the wellbeing of its individual citizens"。这是一个讨论社会和社会成员在社会繁荣和进步问题上关系的话题,实际上就是讨论“国富”和“民强”之间的关系。你可以认为“国富”造就了“民强”,也可以认为因为“民强”所以“国富”。需要提醒的是,无论选择什么观点,都需要阐述清楚“为什么”,而不能只描述一些现象。
1. 一个社会获得整体繁荣的表现有哪些?请举例说明。
回答: 社会稳定,人民生活有保障,公平正义,机会均等。
2. 一个社会的人民生活安康富裕的表现有哪些?请举例说明。
回答: happiness,comfort,security,good,welfare,safety,health,and good fortune
3. 如果一个社会整体实现了进步和繁荣,它的公民是否一定会富裕?为什么?请举例说明。
回答: 一定。因为社会是为了维护每个个体而存在的。比如,美国,加拿大等一些发达国家。
4. 如果一个社会并不太发达,但是人民生活安定富裕,这对于整个社会的繁荣会带来什么好处?会有什么负面作用?请举例说明。
回答: 可能会缺乏前进的动力,比如中东国家靠石油美元过着富裕的生活但是社会缺乏前进动力
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作文
Some people believe that a society must bloom at the cost of putting its overall success before the well-being of its individual citizens,others believe that a society? well-being must depend on the general welfare of all its members.The former claim relies on the belief that there exists an overall success which is independent of its members.However,in my view,this overall success do not exist,society is a constituency of individuals and the standard for prosperity of a society must only be connected with the well being of its individual citizens.

A truly great nation must have powerful comprehensive strengths.And not only are powerful comprehensive strengths reflected in the achievements of rulers and elites,but also in the well-being of its individual citizens.This kind of nation or society are supported by its people and have true cohesions.It could be considered as truly powerful and blooming.For example,the government of United States have  obtained splendid achievements in economy,culture and military.At the same time,the U.S. government also stress on the general welfare of its people and guarantee human rights and democracy.All above allow the society of America to thrive.On the contrary,the U.S.S.R sacrificed well-beings of its people for alleged overall success.Eventually the U.S.S.R are deserted by its people and crumbled.Nevertheless,we fails to draw the conclusion that a society must put its own overall success before the well-being of its individual citizens based on the terms ?overall success?. This conclusion rests on an assumption that there exists an overall social interest which is independent of its members.However,facts tell us this assumption is invalidated.Throughout human history,nearly all the autocracies and despotisms put interests of some particular group or rulers before well-beings of all society members,under the guise of alleged overall success of a society.It is just the reason for wars,revolutions and social upheavals occurred again and again in human history.For instance,Nazi Germany,ruled by Adolf Hitler and Nazi Party,launched the second World War under the banner of the overall success of the German people,resulting in the death of millions of people and disasters.Similarly,North Korea,dominated by the Kim family,maintain its authoritarian domination under the mask of the alleged overall success of the communist,causing millions of people dying of starvation each year.In fact,the key issue is not to distinguish between where is overall success of a society and where is the well-being of individuals.This distinction is actually misleading ,and overall success and the well-being of individual members are not mutually exclusive.Society is a constituency of individual citizens .And there is no such entity that exists independently above the millions of people that is called ?society?. A society must necessarily represents its citizens' interests.When people talk of overall success,they are intended to protect each individual citizens' interests.The Standard for a society of blooms must only be measured by the well-being of its individual citizens.

In sum,the former claim rests on an invalidated assumption.The society are instituted to protect the well-being of its individual citizens and no one is expendable.Once the well-being of individual citizens are realised,it is possible for the society to thrive.
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