TOEFL 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:琉璃要努力
【IBT机经-1】Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: In order to succeed, you should be more like others than be different from everyone else.
题目分析
翻译
你是否同意下述观点:为了成功,你更应该变得和其他人一样而不是与众不同。
指导
题目讨论为了成功应该怎样做的问题。题目中的前提条件是“获得成功“,给出了”如果人们变得和其他人相似就会取得成功“的判断。题目不难理解,和成功有关的实例也不胜枚举,分析题目和拓展写作思路时应该注意以下2点:1、明确自己的观点,到底是同意还是不同意;2、论述中要始终和”获得成功“与”自己和他人的关系“相关联,切忌脱离了题目的前提是”获得成功“。
1. 在我们的日常生活和社会历史中,获得成功的人都应该具备那些素质?这些成功人士是和其他人一样呢还是与众不同呢?请结合实例简述。
回答: 坚持不懈,勤奋努力:司马迁 独具慧眼:马云 与众不同
2. 成功人士的身上,哪些特点是具有普遍性的?那些特质是具有特殊性的?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: 普遍:奋斗的汗水,各行各业都需要努力才能成功 特殊性:行业不同,需要不同的能力
3. 变得和大家相似会出现哪些结果?在什么情况下有助于成功?什么情况下不利于成功?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: 和大家相似,易于得到别人的认可,复制别人的成功,同时也很难凸显出自身的优势。 如各种搜索引擎等。
4. 变得和大家不同有哪些结果?在什么情况下有利于成功?什么情况下不利于成功?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: 独特性使得立刻脱颖而出,但可能不能得到世人的理解,如哥白尼。
5. 变得和他人一样也好,不一样也罢,对成功究竟能起到多大的作用?为了获得成功,除了题目中涉及的那方面问题,还需要那些优秀的品质呢?请结合实例简述。
回答: 与别人是否一样决定了努力的方向,但自身的信念在发展道路上起着重要的作用。
其他用户的回答
作文
In the age of materialism, everyone hopes success and gains more money. However, should we learn to those who are successful, and be more like others to make our dream come true? 
I think the answer of this question is no. In reality, with the swift development of modern society, being different from everyone else and adhered to your beliefs may help you succeed more easily.
First of all, chasing other's pace is not as much of easy as we might suppose. Lacking of experience and good opportunities would bring you failure. Take those search engines for example. Google is a well-known one, and has the most information resource. No doubt, most people choose it and google is the most successful search engines. After that, we have Baidu in China, and Baidu' success must owe to its geographical advantages. Later, other search engines come out, but they could not copy google' success.
Secondly, different people have different talents, and if find an appropriate direction, everyone would get a chance to be somebody. Not everyone could be Albert Einstein, for his talent for physics is in comparable. However, one might be the Einstein of his own field, if he could find  his talent. Even though Bill Gates has not got his bachelor degree, but no one could deny his talent for software. Gates has confidence in himself, and then he became one of the most successful people in the world.
There is no denying the fact that success is built with drops of sweat just as ocean is built with drops of water. Therefore, anyone who want to be successful must spare no effort and never stop. Before getting others' appreciation, there might be lots of difficulty in the way. However, jumping over all the hurdles would make one become a great person. When heliocentric theory came out, no one believed it, but Copernicus did not change his idea even losing his life, for which we think he is a great man today.
All in all, in order to succeed, we should make great efforts just like others, but more important, we should be different from others when we choose which way to go, for we must take account our own talent and do what no one dose.
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