TOEFL 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:勘明培
【IBT机经-1】Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: In order to succeed, you should be more like others than be different from everyone else.
题目分析
翻译
你是否同意下述观点:为了成功,你更应该变得和其他人一样而不是与众不同。
指导
题目讨论为了成功应该怎样做的问题。题目中的前提条件是“获得成功“,给出了”如果人们变得和其他人相似就会取得成功“的判断。题目不难理解,和成功有关的实例也不胜枚举,分析题目和拓展写作思路时应该注意以下2点:1、明确自己的观点,到底是同意还是不同意;2、论述中要始终和”获得成功“与”自己和他人的关系“相关联,切忌脱离了题目的前提是”获得成功“。
1. 在我们的日常生活和社会历史中,获得成功的人都应该具备那些素质?这些成功人士是和其他人一样呢还是与众不同呢?请结合实例简述。
回答: 应该有独立思考的能力,有自制力,刻苦努力,不受环境影响,有着自己的追求和信仰,能够受内心动力驱使,在自己的知识的帮助下走向成功.
2. 成功人士的身上,哪些特点是具有普遍性的?那些特质是具有特殊性的?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: 刻苦,独立思考。认真严禁有自己的追求。乔布斯搞创新,这种创造力引领他走向成功,但不一定所有成功的人都需要有足够的创造力。比如腾讯的ceo马化腾,它能够看清市场的需要,适时的将实时通讯工具引入中国并将其变为社会主流。sns并非其原创,但是他也能成功。.
3. 变得和大家相似会出现哪些结果?在什么情况下有助于成功?什么情况下不利于成功?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: 变得和大家相似可能无法突出自己,不容易抓住机会,变得平凡。如果在选拔人才的时候一刀切,有着明确的标准于是别的优秀的学生保持一致就可以一起以高标准选入。但是当情况要求你突出自我的时候,比如海选歌手,如果唱歌的歌手和别人都一样,无法突出自己的特色,必然不能成功。.
4. 变得和大家不同有哪些结果?在什么情况下有利于成功?什么情况下不利于成功?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: 变得和大家不同就会给别人自己独树一帜鹤立鸡群的感觉。盲目的追求在众人中凸显自己而不择手段和方法,不会帮助成功反而会引向失败。当别人都认真的学习时为了显得不同而玩游戏,当别人都遵守校园规则的时候可以去打破规则,这样确实能变得和别人不同但这种改变非但不会使人成功反而会让人堕落。只有变得和大家不同是能让自己有比众人凸显的能力的时候才有利于成功。比如一个学习生物的人精通了化学,达到了比众人更高的层次,便能突出自我,做到快学科融合的应用所学,更容易成功.
5. 变得和他人一样也好,不一样也罢,对成功究竟能起到多大的作用?为了获得成功,除了题目中涉及的那方面问题,还需要那些优秀的品质呢?请结合实例简述。
回答: 一样不一样,只是一个表象,真正决定能否成功的还在真才实学。不同常人的人中又成功者,平凡的人中照样有成功的。不过想要成功,必须要相信自我,做一行精一行,能够踏踏实实的把事情坐下去,否则不可能成功。不论乔布斯还是马化腾,都不是一开始就成功的,他们都经历了起步的阶段,在这个阶段,他们也都是众人,也都是没有成功的一个凡人。但是他们坚持做下去了,贯彻自己的想法,脚踏实地,最后才能成功。.
其他用户的回答
作文
There are many people who become success. Some are the ones you can recognize at the first glance since they very different from others, others are someway more regular. But if we scan in the group of people who become success, we can easily finger out that most of them have some points others don't have, in another word, they are more particular. While most people live a ordinary life if they behave just like the people around them. That is why I disagree with the statement. I believe that people are much more likely to be success if they are different from others.
Firstly, many successful people have a creative thinking that others don't have, which makes them different from others and lead them to success. For example, Steve Jobs, who was the CEO of Apple, had a very creative thinking and behave very different from others. He created iPhone which led a revolution of smart phones over the world. He originated the iOS, which is a smart phone system, which allowed people to do many things they have to finish on computers before. His creative thinking gave birth to the phone and granted his dream of success. Then we have to admit that it is the creative thinking that make people success.
Secondly, many successful people have the ability to catch the trend of society that others can't, which makes them different from others and become success. For example, Ma Huateng, the CEO of a Tencent, foresaw the trend that Internet would be more and more popular in the end of 20th century. He successfully imported the technology of instant online communicating, which enabled him for pushing his own SNS platform, QQ, to the netizens in China. QQ than became a hit to the society that time and Ma became successful in no time. His success is because that his product met the strong potential  need of online chatting software in China. It is the ability to catch the trend others don't have that makes people success.
Admittedly, some people who behave just like others but also become success. There was a time when many people make clone of memory sticks in China. All of them sold the fake product, it's the same. But there was a merchant who chose better raw material and made the quality better but sold the same price as others. Then after some time his product became heated and he gained a lot of money from it. Although he is successful in some way, his success is not stable at all since no fake can live long. It is almost luck and opportunity which made his success. Maybe an ordinary people may succeed even if they are just like people around them, but we can't depend on doing so and wait for being success. There is no guarantee that we must be success in the future if we are alike others in all ways. Imitations will never lead to a great people.
In conclusion, I believe that if we want to be successful, we should distinguish ourselves from others, rather than just do the same as others do. 
In conclusion, I believe that if we want to be successful, we should distinguish ourselves from others, rather than just do the same as others do. 
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