GRE 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:benjamin_431
People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making. [Specific Task Instruction: Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.]
题目分析
翻译
人们的行为很大程度上是由自己不能驾驭的力量决定的。[说明:写一篇文章,讨论你同意或反对这个说法达到什么程度,并解释你选择这个观点的理由。在展开和支持你的观点时,你需要考虑这个说法可能在哪些方面成立或者不成立,并解释你所考虑的这些东西如何体现你的观点]
指导
本题讨论对个人行为负责相关的问题,题目认为个人行为并非是自己可以决定的,更多得是被外界左右。本题改编自老GRE的ISSUE93"The concept of 'individual responsibility' is a necessary fiction. Although societies must hold individuals accountable for their own actions, people's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making",和老GRE的ISSUE156"Choice is an illusion. In reality, our lives are controlled by the society in which we live"有互通之处。在分析的过程中,可以从个人责任的意义以及是否必要,影响个人行为的因素,外界对个人行为的影响方面和具体形式、程度等方面展开思考。
1. 如果不存在“个人责任”这个概念,人们的学习、工作、生活以及整个社会的发展都会出现哪些问题?请举例并简述。
回答: 1 一个人犯罪,可以推脱到客观原因,从而逃避责任 2 个人的研究成果,归为集体,则缺乏研究的动力 3 父母不尽职尽责抚养孩子 4 商店卖假货,威胁消费者的身体健康 5 老师不认真教育学生,学生无法在社会上立足
2. 让个人为自己的行为负责对于社会有哪些好处?请举例并简述。
回答: 1 有助于打击犯罪,人们会考虑到犯罪的后果 2 培养责任心,人们会遵守约定,遵守诚信原则 3 商家不会卖有问题的食品,人们对市面上的食物放心 4 老师会认真对学生进行教育,学生会学到更多知识 5 父母会尽自己的抚养责任,孩子将健康成长
3. 人们的行为都受到哪些因素的影响?请举例并简述。(可从内因、外因两方面分别考虑)
回答: 1 心理健康程度 2 受教育程度 3 人际关系 4 法律道德约束
4. 外界因素在哪些情况下以何种方式影响着人们的行为?请举例并简述。
回答: 1 受教育程度:学生时期所伤的学校是否有良好的教学方法 2 人际关系:朋友的社会层次,以及自己所处的社会层次 3 法律道德约束:该社会有什么风俗传统,法律是如何约束个人行为的
5. 人们是否可以不顾外界环境的影响而进行自己的选择?如果可以,请举例;如果不可以,请解释原因。
回答: 有的时候可以,有的时候不可以。 1 人们有权利选择自己的兴趣爱好 2 人们有权利发表言论 3 但兴趣爱好威胁到他人生命时候将会被制止 4 当言论构成诽谤时则会收到法律的约束
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作文
Generally, people’s behavior is the consequence of exogenous reasons and endogenous ones. That means a person behavior is result from the function of this person himself and the circumstance. So the statement, people’s is largely determined by forces not of their own making, is not a sufficient supported one.   Circumstance does have function on people’s behavior. The factors may be other people or other non-subjective ones. Probably, human might have explosive reaction from those factors near him. For example, when in the teenage, people will be involved with other members in the family, like parents. Parents are the first teacher of young. After they give birth to them, children even infant are good at imitate their behavior. In the beginning, is learning to eat. The parents firstly open their mouth and the infant follow it. Then the parent convey the food into their own mouth, and the infant follow it too. In this way, the infant learn how to grab the tools like spoon and forks by mimic the behavior of their parents.   When the infant grow up to an primary students, both family and school teachers will formulate its behavior in the public places. In a family, when meet someone they knew, the parents will demonstrate how to say hello to them to express affinity. After parents say, the children will be asked to regenerate a greeting to others. In another conditions, the children may rush around and making noise. When this happen, the parents will give a advise or a warn to them, that rushing in a house is unsafe and when inside a building, people should keep quiet.   Then when the children are sent to primary school, the duty of teacher may sometimes substitute the one of their parents. In a primary school, the teacher will teach the children some most basic usage of knowledge, such as listening , speaking, reading and writing. From the letters to words, from numbers to equations, the teacher teach child for their need and the basic element knowledge of communication and calculations. However, when a children misbehave ina public places, the teacher will correct it and inform them the reason, this is the same as family. And children will automatically mimic their peers. Starting to communication and make effect on each other.   Although family and schools are places which can correctly shape their behavior, there are many factors inside people’s mind that affect their behavior, too. When the teenage grow up, they will have their own hobbits and mind, they will learn to consider from different angles. I conclude these factors to be an endogenous one. For example, making choice for themselves is a typical process that endogenous factors determinate people behavior. When people feel happy, more positive behavior will exist, like smiling to others and be nice to them. However, when they fill annoyed, they will yelling at somebody, to express their anger and discontent. Sometimes, people behave according to their own preference, such as play football or badminton, go shopping or go hiking. These behavior are only decided by their own choice and demand.   In conclusion, the factors to what decides human’s behavior is not a statis one. People can make choice for themselves or involved with other factors which are objective.
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