GRE 作文题目
来源于朗播用户：阮伟亮
People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making. [Specific Task Instruction: Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.]
题目分析
翻译
人们的行为很大程度上是由自己不能驾驭的力量决定的。[说明：写一篇文章，讨论你同意或反对这个说法达到什么程度，并解释你选择这个观点的理由。在展开和支持你的观点时，你需要考虑这个说法可能在哪些方面成立或者不成立，并解释你所考虑的这些东西如何体现你的观点]
指导
本题讨论对个人行为负责相关的问题，题目认为个人行为并非是自己可以决定的，更多得是被外界左右。本题改编自老GRE的ISSUE93"The concept of 'individual responsibility' is a necessary fiction. Although societies must hold individuals accountable for their own actions, people's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making"，和老GRE的ISSUE156"Choice is an illusion. In reality, our lives are controlled by the society in which we live"有互通之处。在分析的过程中，可以从个人责任的意义以及是否必要，影响个人行为的因素，外界对个人行为的影响方面和具体形式、程度等方面展开思考。
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1. 如果不存在“个人责任”这个概念，人们的学习、工作、生活以及整个社会的发展都会出现哪些问题？请举例并简述。
回答：
学习：这会导致缺乏自主性 老师在就好好学 老师一不在就不学了
工作：同学习一样 老板在 就干活 老板一走 就懒散 聊天 不干活了
生活：责任 就是自己对自己负责 知道那些事该做 哪些事不该做 嫖能毁志 赌能败家 这就是 个人责任对自我的约束
整个社会的发展：没了这个概念 每个人都缺乏 进取心 得过且过 社会将失去前进的动力
清朝后期 人不称之为人 叫奴才 所以 整个中国 固步自封 盲目自大 停滞不前 直到鸦片战争 炮声响起。
2. 让个人为自己的行为负责对于社会有哪些好处？请举例并简述。
回答：
能充分调动个人的主观能动性
Harvard University 学生 在大学的四年里 都是自己管理自己 自己选择去做自己想做的事情 而且 可以重新选择专业 这样 学生的主观能动性 被充分的调动了 把自己的精力 时间 投入到自己真正想做的事情上 从而产生学习动力 成为各个领域的精英 所以美国才 有那么多的诺贝奖得主 有那么多的高科技公司 经济 科技 军事实力 居全球第一。
3. 人们的行为都受到哪些因素的影响？请举例并简述。（可从内因、外因两方面分别考虑）
回答：
比如说 学习上 突然不学了 一玩就是一天
内因：累了想放松 自己对自己的要求松懈了 即自己对自己降低要求了 也是缺乏动力的表现 就像自行车轮胎 没气了
外因：各种诱惑 如网上各种桃色新闻 体育表演 比如NBA ,TV show
4. 外界因素在哪些情况下以何种方式影响着人们的行为？请举例并简述。
回答：
一个年轻人 扶起 一个老年人 竟然 被诬陷为撞倒老人的肇事者
其影响就是 在一条马路上 一个小女孩 被车撞了以后 经过的 许多路人 视而不见
因为 他们也怕被认为是肇事者 而承担责任 所以 就当没看见一样走过去了。
5. 人们是否可以不顾外界环境的影响而进行自己的选择？如果可以，请举例；如果不可以，请解释原因。
回答：
可以
新中国 刚刚成立 就敢出兵朝鲜 参加朝鲜战争
当时 台湾没有收回来 美国军队 在第二次世界大战中 摧毁了日本和德国两个军事强国 兵锋之盛已达定点 苏联 又不答应提供空军支援 朝鲜军队已经退到了鸭绿江附近
此时 中国就敢出兵朝鲜 与美国军队交战 让全世界佩服 而且一战打出来五十年和平
这就是 新中国不顾外界环境的影响 敢于出兵朝鲜 做出自己的选择。
其他用户的回答
作文
People are
influenced by the forces not of their own making, when they make decisions. I
think that people's behavior is not largely determined by forces not of their
own making.
It is beneficial for
one person to be responsible for his own deed. Because it can make individual have initiative进取心 (主观能动性). The students of Harvard University
manage their time depending on their own in the four years of university. They
can choose to do things they want to do and select the major again. So the
subjective initiative is active. The students
put their energy and time into the things that they really want to do so that
they generate willing to study and become the elites in different kinds of
area. This is why the United States
effuses so many Noble Price owners and the reason that the economy, technology
and sports of the United
States are the first in the world.
However, the
outside factors impact the deed of people. The Peng Yu accident provides a case for this. Peng Yu is
a teenager. One day, he helped an old man who is hit by a car. But the son of
that old man thought that Peng Yu was responsible for this thing. Then Peng Yu had
a lawsuit. The influence of this affair is far-reaching. Recently, a little
girl is hit by a car and many persons pass her just like the girl does not
exist. Because they are afraid of facing the same trouble of Peng Yu, they do
not help the little girl.
People can make their
own decision without accounting the influence of the outside environment. In Shanghai, an old man
fallen down because of hot weather. Many people only stand around him and no
one helps him. At this moment, a student goes to the old man and makes the old
man lie on the ground regardless of other people's persuasion. The student says
one person can not have no a heart which is willing to help others. Half an
hour later, the old man is sent to the hospital. But the student quietly leaves
and does not say his name. What a good man the student is！How simple words he says! The student is a good man with
a golden heart.
Although people's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their
own making, I think that people's behavior is largely determined by forces
not of their own making.
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