TOEFL 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:zr_0999
Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
题目分析
翻译
有人喜欢手工工作。有人喜欢利用机器。你喜欢哪个?用具体的原因和例子来支持你的观点。
指导
这道题目是要比较手工工作和机器制作。我们需要选择自己更为喜爱的方式,然后说明自己的理由。
1. 你从事过手工工作吗?描述一个具体的工作。
回答: 是的。做生日卡片
2. 你有没有利用机器工作过?描述一个具体的工作。
回答: 是的。做电子影集
3. 你觉得手工工作有什么好处和不便?
回答: 好处:表达心意;锻炼手指灵活性;休息 不便:不精致;费时间;质量不稳定
4. 你觉得机器工作有什么好处和不便?
回答: 好处:简单,比如有Photoshop;精致;快 不便:学习使用机器本身就比较费事
5. 有哪些行业是从手工生产转向机器生产的?你觉得你喜欢这个转变吗?为什么?
回答: 纺织、包装 喜欢。标准化。(1)大规模生产降低成本,从而降低价格;(2)质量统一;
其他用户的回答
作文
The Industrial Revolution indicated the beginning of the age of machines,  the time that machines replaced humans' hands as the predominant production way. In my opinion,  the transformation from manual labour-based economy to machine-based manufacturing is unavoidable, because production in machines has many advantages than production by hands.
Firstly, machines can produce much more products during the same time. Consider making clothes.  A skilled tailor must take 2 or 3 days to make a coat by hand, but if we make coats in a machine,  it only takes less than one hour. And, consider the publishment of newspaper. In the past, workers must copies newspapers in white paper, printing ink and a board was carved words on one by one. It is not only a boring, time-conmusing but low-output work. Nowadays, with duplicating machines' help, we can get millions newspaper in a day as long as we put on a few buttons.
Secondly, the qualities of the products produced by machines have are more stable. People's work are easily affected by a lot of factors, such as moods, health conditions and so on. Compared with human being, these problems never exist to machines, which have fixed specifications and flows. For instance, it is hard to find out two dumplings which have the same weight and outlook in the dumplings made by your mother. However, on the contrary, the dumplings were sold in supermarkets always share everything in common because they are made by machines. 
Thirdly, machines make production easier. With machines' help, we can easily do a lot of things which askd for various longtime trainings in the past. For example, in the past, if you want to draw a portrait of your friend as his birthday gift, most of us should pay for a professional painter to do it. But now, you can finish all things by yourself in 3 steps: first, choose a beautiful picture of your friend; second, buy a software in Apple Store and install it in your computer; finally, put the button which transform the picture to a portrait.  No more than 5 minutes, you can get a perfect portrait, which is even better than some painters's work.
Admittedly, some productions still make by hands in order to keep their quality or style, such as LV's bags, Rolex's wrist watches and chairs in Cadillac car. But they cannot meet most of people's daily life need, and they often are very expensive. It is the productions made by machines, such as foods, clothes, houses, cars and so on, to support the great rapid development of the human society. We cannot live on without machines. 
All in all, I think production in machine have more advantages than work by hand.. 
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