TOEFL 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:奔腾的被子植物
【IBT机经-1】Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: In order to succeed, you should be more like others than be different from everyone else.
题目分析
翻译
你是否同意下述观点:为了成功,你更应该变得和其他人一样而不是与众不同。
指导
题目讨论为了成功应该怎样做的问题。题目中的前提条件是“获得成功“,给出了”如果人们变得和其他人相似就会取得成功“的判断。题目不难理解,和成功有关的实例也不胜枚举,分析题目和拓展写作思路时应该注意以下2点:1、明确自己的观点,到底是同意还是不同意;2、论述中要始终和”获得成功“与”自己和他人的关系“相关联,切忌脱离了题目的前提是”获得成功“。
1. 在我们的日常生活和社会历史中,获得成功的人都应该具备那些素质?这些成功人士是和其他人一样呢还是与众不同呢?请结合实例简述。
回答: 获得成功的人对于他们所追求的东西都很执着,甚至于偏执。比如Jobs,他对于的产品的工业设计有着极高的要求,甚至为了手机的厚度不停地进行修正
2. 成功人士的身上,哪些特点是具有普遍性的?那些特质是具有特殊性的?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: 成功人身上 hardworking , diligent, desire to success
3. 变得和大家相似会出现哪些结果?在什么情况下有助于成功?什么情况下不利于成功?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: you will lose opportunity to build your competitive edges. for example, products' specific characters have more effect on cellphone consumer market. XiaoMi Company built up in 2010, became a excellent company with the third biggest market share. How did XiaoMi company have easy access to succeed in just four years? Unlike other companies which just followed the regular rules, XiaoMI company deepened its software and user interface, and execute an attractive price performance. As a result, This company boost its commercial performance to achieve its goal.
4. 变得和大家不同有哪些结果?在什么情况下有利于成功?什么情况下不利于成功?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: undertake an immense risk to be eliminated. because if you behave like others, you can share their practical experience and have little chance to make mistakes. When you lack knowledge and experience , imitating other people who has succeeded is the fastest way to improve. Thus, it is a effective method to succeed when you behave in a similar way.
5. 变得和他人一样也好,不一样也罢,对成功究竟能起到多大的作用?为了获得成功,除了题目中涉及的那方面问题,还需要那些优秀的品质呢?请结合实例简述。
回答: you can progress at a fast pace in order to succeed if you like others; however you have to be different to have your own competitive advantages in the long term. time-management skill and social skills.
其他用户的回答
作文
It is believed that success is contributed by many factors such as hardworking, efficient method, teamwork, and so on.  At first glance, being more like people is undoubtedly vital, because experience and right method can be learned by imitating others. However,  a closer reasoning reveals that being different from others is more important than being like everyone else.
You will lose opportunity to build your competitive edges if you are just like others.  Simulating others only reduce the gap between you and other people. Seen from a long term, it is easy to realize that only have your own advantages can you surpass other people to succeed. For example, products' specific characters have more effect on cellphone consumer market.  XiaoMi Company built up in 2010, became a excellent company with the third biggest market share. How did XiaoMi company have easy access to succeed in just four years? Unlike other companies which just followed the regular rules, XiaoMI company deepened its software and user interface, and execute an attractive price performance. As a result, This company boost its commercial performance to achieve its goal. 
Although when you imitate other people you have less chance to make a mistake, and you can learn experience and method. Just imitating means you are only a follower, a follower would lose access to success. TherefoIt is more important to be different to achieve success
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