IELTS 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:石天凡
Today's children are living under more pressure from the society than children in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
题目分析
翻译
与以前的孩子相比,现在的孩子生活压力更大。你是否同意,或部分同意这种观点?
指导
在这篇文章里,你需要分析现在孩子的生活压力是否更大。
1. 与以前的孩子相比,现在的孩子多了什么苦恼?
回答: 学业上的竞争升学的压力,父母工作繁忙自己有烦恼无人倾诉。
2. 与以前的孩子相比,现在的孩子的幸福体现在哪里?
回答: 生活水平大大提高 ,科技的进步提供接触海量信息库的途径使得学习可以更加主动和自由
其他用户的回答
作文
the world we live nowadays is more peaceful than that of 50 years ago.when we adult are enjoying the harmony of the life,some problem of our children result:the increasing number of commiting suicide and emerging of hypochondriac.some people propose that our children are living under more pressure from the society than children in the past.but i do not think so
in the presence of abundant food and advanced medication,today' children have escaped from widespread horror of epidemic and hunger.In the world war two,many fathers are enlisted in the army so that their children have to work and burden dramatic pressure to be viable.they are also confronted with disease.in the period of lacking medical facility ,disease means death.this phenomenon also appear in china and europe during the war
in the absense of war,today'children burden much less than previous children.in the ww2,many children suffered from the danger of being killed and relative'death,which means he orshe would be an orphan.such condition have been described by the people whose childhood once underwent that period and we can find them in library.such document of mental sphere of the war in china ,vietnam,countrys in europe.
however,today'children are confronted with more competition and loneliness.the parents have to work and can not have time to accompany with their children .when the children have problem ,they can not communicate with them.futhermore,pressure from exam is increasing dramatically.but such problems can be dealt easily if their parents and the society pay more attention to the children.
in summary ,with abundant food , advanced medication and the absense of war, today's children burden less pressure than the children in the past.
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