GRE 作文题目
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People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making. [Specific Task Instruction: Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.]
题目分析
翻译
人们的行为很大程度上是由自己不能驾驭的力量决定的。[说明:写一篇文章,讨论你同意或反对这个说法达到什么程度,并解释你选择这个观点的理由。在展开和支持你的观点时,你需要考虑这个说法可能在哪些方面成立或者不成立,并解释你所考虑的这些东西如何体现你的观点]
指导
本题讨论对个人行为负责相关的问题,题目认为个人行为并非是自己可以决定的,更多得是被外界左右。本题改编自老GRE的ISSUE93"The concept of 'individual responsibility' is a necessary fiction. Although societies must hold individuals accountable for their own actions, people's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making",和老GRE的ISSUE156"Choice is an illusion. In reality, our lives are controlled by the society in which we live"有互通之处。在分析的过程中,可以从个人责任的意义以及是否必要,影响个人行为的因素,外界对个人行为的影响方面和具体形式、程度等方面展开思考。
1. 如果不存在“个人责任”这个概念,人们的学习、工作、生活以及整个社会的发展都会出现哪些问题?请举例并简述。
回答:
人们会为所欲为,做事情不考虑后果,只顾自己的利益。比如,在学习方面,会整天只想着其他事情,不好好学习。在工作的方面,整个团队不团结,不愿意为他人付出,只想着自己的利益,结果是什么事情也干不成。在社会方面,一些人不误正业,因为不用再为自己的行为负责,他们会危害社会的治安,对他人的人身安全,财产安全造成隐患
2. 让个人为自己的行为负责对于社会有哪些好处?请举例并简述。
回答:
可以再一定程度上约束认得行为,有利于社会治安。比如,一个人想要偷窃,考虑到自己到承担的后果,也许就不偷窃了,从而提高了社会治安
3. 人们的行为都受到哪些因素的影响?请举例并简述。(可从内因、外因两方面分别考虑)
回答:
内在,受到自己的爱好,偏好,性格等影响。外在,是受到他人的行为,环境的影响
4. 外界因素在哪些情况下以何种方式影响着人们的行为?请举例并简述。
回答:
比如在学习方面,一个良好的学习环境有利于促进个人的学习欲望和效率,然而一个毫无学习氛围的地方,因为各种因素,即使我们很像学习,也最终学不进去。在工作方面,一个团队要达到某个目标,就要齐心协力,放弃一部分个人的利益,个人的习惯,只有这样才能取得良好的结果
5. 人们是否可以不顾外界环境的影响而进行自己的选择?如果可以,请举例;如果不可以,请解释原因。
回答:
这个问题不能这么绝对的回答,只能说在一定程度下是可以不受外界的影响的。比如在选择培养自己的兴趣爱好时,可以不受外界影响。再比如,买东西是,在选择颜色时。。。
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作文
Is people's behavior determined by force not thier own choice? The author considers that it is impossible to have no relationship with other people when one live in society, which couldn't avoid that we would be influenced by other people's determines and surrounding. As a consequence, peopel's behavior isn't follow their heart, that is, people's behavior is determined largely by force. Certainly, there are many factors could affect us to make a desicion, which is not our first choice, but that isn't represent that all choices were determined by force. Sometimes, these foeces could help us to exclude some confused problems, even some of choices could help us to make a steadfast choice which was truly coincidence with our heartfeelings.
In commonplace, somthing that could affect people to make a decision can divide into external, internal. Internal factors include our personility, preference and tastes. However, these factors aren't force like the author cited. On the other hand, the external factors include environment, other people's decision, opportunities, laws and responsibility. Nevertheless, these forces aren't force us to do something that we disgust, in the contrast, some stupid options were expelled by these force, and the options weren't our real choice, even these force could help us to establish a steadfast faith to operate something.
Unfortunely, we couldn't fallow our heart all the time and forces couldn't help us get rid of some disturbing options all the time. Most of times, we have no choice but to take other people's feelings into account, otherwise, we would be aloof by all the people sooner or later. If we were all in a team, and everyone ignored command, then this team would never complete their mission. On the contury, if all of people comply leader's command, they would meet their goal, although some of people has to disregard their opinions. For instance, in a rowing competation, everyone wouldn't be a champion unless they abondon their bias.
In additition, we have to consider many factors but our own choice in life. Our hierarchy of considersion is first to our responsibility, next to environment, then to others feelings, and finally to our own preferance. If we discarded our responsibily, that is, everyone wouldn't take any responsibillity even if we do something wrong, then the whole society would trouble in a fiasco, withou any doubt. For example, students wouldn't obtain knowledge sedently, which is a catastrophe to our country. In addition, employees wouldn't devote themselves into their carreer, which would led to the economy of one country would bankrupt.
Whereas, I'm not deny that we are constrainted by many kinds of force, becourse of our responsibilty, laws. Most of time, the responsibility and laws doesn't restraint common public at all,; we still could fallow our hearts,instead, they just to constraint some people who have trend to do criminal things. Such as one want to steal a treature, however, when the one considered consquence he faced, he or she might give up the idea. So, our society could be more peaceful.
Although most of time we have no choic to give up our own preferance but to take other people's feelings into consideration, these force also could help us to make a more wittful choice and firm our decision. In a word, forces wouldn't force us to do somthing we disgust all the time, however, they also firm our faith.