GRE 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:毛昞华
Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition. [Specific Task Instruction: Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.]
题目分析
翻译
年轻人应被鼓励去追求长远并现实的目标,而不是眼前的声望和名誉。[说明:写一篇文章,讨论你同意或反对这个建议达到什么程度,并解释你选择这个观点的理由。在展开和支持你的观点时,你要描述在具体的环境中,采纳这个建议可能会有什么好处,或不会有什么好处,并解释这些例子如何体现了你的观点]
指导
本题为老GRE的ISSUE86原题。题目讨论年轻人奋斗目标的问题,题目认为相对于追求眼前的声望,长远并现实的目标更值得年轻人去追求。在分析的过程中,可以从年轻人本身的需求以及不足、两种目标对年轻人的正负面影响,以及不同领域不同环境的分情况讨论等方面展开思考。对于本题这种对比型的题目(长远并现实的目标和眼前的声望名誉之间对比),需要注意不应该孤立得去说二者各自的利弊,而是应当将二者放在一起通过对比、类比等方法将差异展现出来,这样才能说明哪个更好。
1. 请列举两个你认为成功的教育年轻人的事例,并分析事例中如何指导年轻人去建立目标的,并分析建立了什么样的目标。
回答: (1)Jeremy Lin: graduated from Harvard University with an ecomonics major, Lin does not choose to work in a chamber in the Wall Street and take a high-paid and promising job as most of the economics major graduates dream to do. Rather, he insists on his goal since the childhood--to play in the NBA. Success lies in following what your heart tells you to do with no regards of what others usually do. Her mother allowed him to play the ball and did not push him to acadamic works as most of Asian mothers would do, because she believed what only the God and your heart can tell the right thing to do, and the public judgement may, more or less, weaken your independent will and make you live an ordinary life. If you want to play in NBA hard enough, then fight for it. (2)Bill Gates Bill Gates making his decision to drop out from Harvard is an appropriate instance. Now when we look back Gates successful experiences, we have to admit that his resolutely dropping out from Harvard a top university, and not even caring too much of the result is a bold and wise decision. What does it mean a man who can graduate from Harvard? It means, as everybody knows, a well earning job awaits you, and at least be a leaguer of middle class. Gates not only gave up a diploma of the world's No.1 university but also refused a designed bright future. I think Gate's reason is simple and clear. Because he noticed PC's rapid development in the future. According to long views, if Gates did not quit at that time, albeit I am sure there would be a operation system similar to MS-DOS and Windows today, probably neither Gates would be the richest man in the world, nor Microsoft was today's software giant. (3)Li Yanhong (4)Mark Z
2. 对“长远并现实的目标”的追求会给年轻人带来哪些影响?(可从影响的正负面以及直接和间接影响角度分析)
回答: Young man is always unrealistic and fancys much, deviating themselves from the initial goals. long-term and realistic objective can provide us a big view of life, inhibit the impulse distracting us from the goal and help us to arrange our lives to achieve the goal. However, impulse, fancy and passion are indispensable parts of the youth, without which a 20-your-old may no longer be young. Unaffacted by the social tradition and customs, youth may always come up with creative ideas and view the world with a different vision. Mark Z on Facebook;Bill Gates on Microsoft; What is more, long-term goals may make us much more realistic and dare not achieve our dreams such as being a professional athletes which may be not as realistic as an office job. eg.Jeremy Lin
3. 对“眼前的声望名誉”的追求会给年轻人带来哪些影响?(可从影响的正负面以及直接和间接影响角度分析)
回答: Negative: attractive to especially young man who is more likely to be tempted. The young may be eluded by the immediate fame and success. Robinho, who is once regarded the next leader of the soccer team of Brazil, the once talented teenager, couldn't resist the fame and high pay, started his career in Europe, the center of professional soccer, when his will and physical condition are both not ready. Addicted to alcohol and nightlife in Europe, the talent has now become just a common player, way far from what is expected. Positive: Jeremy Lin, Mark Z, Bill Gates
4. “长远并现实的目标”和“眼前的声望名誉”之间存在哪些关系?请举例并简述。
回答: (1) Sometimes, they can be unified. To get the immediate fame and recognation is the first step to achive the long-term goal. eg.Kobe Bryant, the 1997 high school student, chose to go to NBA and played the All-Star game in the sophomore year. Those instant success made him more confident and hard-working to become the best in NBA, the long-term goal. (2) However, more often, the two are contradictory. As for those scearios about collge: To go to college or to get a paid job when family is at proverty;to go to the best college or to act in the movie Harry Potter;
5. 在哪些环境下“长远并现实的目标”更有利于年轻人的发展,在哪些环境下“眼前的声望名誉”又更有意义?请举例并简述。
回答: Both of the choices may lead to success or failure. There is no absolute answer for that dilemma: (1) follow your will and heart, ask what you truly want. Jeremy Lin. (2) people are getting realistic american dream ----to seize oppourtunity
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