GRE 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:Aeros
People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making. [Specific Task Instruction: Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.]
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翻译
人们的行为很大程度上是由自己不能驾驭的力量决定的。[说明:写一篇文章,讨论你同意或反对这个说法达到什么程度,并解释你选择这个观点的理由。在展开和支持你的观点时,你需要考虑这个说法可能在哪些方面成立或者不成立,并解释你所考虑的这些东西如何体现你的观点]
指导
本题讨论对个人行为负责相关的问题,题目认为个人行为并非是自己可以决定的,更多得是被外界左右。本题改编自老GRE的ISSUE93"The concept of 'individual responsibility' is a necessary fiction. Although societies must hold individuals accountable for their own actions, people's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making",和老GRE的ISSUE156"Choice is an illusion. In reality, our lives are controlled by the society in which we live"有互通之处。在分析的过程中,可以从个人责任的意义以及是否必要,影响个人行为的因素,外界对个人行为的影响方面和具体形式、程度等方面展开思考。
1. 如果不存在“个人责任”这个概念,人们的学习、工作、生活以及整个社会的发展都会出现哪些问题?请举例并简述。
回答: 如果不存在个人责任这个概念,人们的学习、工作生活中就会互相推脱,工作效率降低。
2. 让个人为自己的行为负责对于社会有哪些好处?请举例并简述。
回答: 让个人为自己的行为负责,可以使每个人都关注自己的行为,发挥自己的能量,为社会的进步贡献自己的力量。为个人行为负责,可以是我们及时有效的找出改进的方法,同事对于做出突出成就的人社会可以树立起学习的榜样。
3. 人们的行为都受到哪些因素的影响?请举例并简述。(可从内因、外因两方面分别考虑)
回答: 从外因方面,人的行为受到法律、规章制度的制约。任何一个生活在法治社会的人都应当遵守法律;在学校的学生,工作的工人等等会受到学校、单位制度的制约。 从内因方面,人的行为受到自己身体健康状况,受教育程度,文化背景等因素的制约。
4. 外界因素在哪些情况下以何种方式影响着人们的行为?请举例并简述。
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5. 人们是否可以不顾外界环境的影响而进行自己的选择?如果可以,请举例;如果不可以,请解释原因。
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作文
        Recently, there has been a debate on wether people should follow the regular social regulations or follow there own hearts. Some people hold the opinion that it is the forces from outside, rather than the inner force, that determine people's behavior. In contrust, some people believe that people's activitey sould be only directed by their own minds. As far as I am concerned, I believe that people's activities are restricted under different kinds of regulations, which are not made by themselves.

        The society people live in today is full of different focres, rules, and regulations, no matter in which country people live. People can not ignore these forces from the outside world. For example , the students have to obey the rules of their school. A college student will not receive his or her degree without finishing the requried courses and obtaining enough credits. In certain majors, although students have the right to choose which class they would like to take, they have to take the compulsory class whatever they like or not. Not only the students, everyone in the society has to behave under the restrictions of their fields: workers in the factory are restricted manufacturing standards of production; doctors in the hospital give priscriptions under the restriction of the medicine; drivers must drive under the guide of policeman and traffic regulations.
 
      If one society lack of basic forces and laws to control people's behavior, the society will fall into disordered. For example, in the ten years from 1960 to 1970, China was enduring the culture reverlution. At that time, college students could not learn knowledges since the school regulations were abondoned. In contrust, students were fighting with the teachers who were treated as capitalists. As a result, a large number good teachers suffered great hurt at that time. Moreover, the young people learned nothing at school and their career development was negtively affected after the culture reverlution.

      Acturally , people have been influced from the time they were born. People's behavior is determined by multiple forces which can not be decided by themselves. For example, the enviroment in which one person grows up is determined by his or her family, nationality, enthnic culture, and many other factors. Just like people can not choose their parents, they can hardly change the overall enviroment the live in. If people don't care about the outside world and concentrate to much to themselves, it is likely that they will lack of the respectation cooperation among the people.

      Although certain forces that come from one's herat will help that person to achieve his or her goal more easily, such as one's self-confidence. At the same time, people have to be guided by the laws and rules in the society.To sum up, the world people live in is full of regulations and connections. One single person can not survive in an absence of restriction.
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