写作指导 People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making. [Specific Task Instruction: Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the sta

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People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making. [Specific Task Instruction: Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.]

题目分析

翻译

人们的行为很大程度上是由自己不能驾驭的力量决定的。[说明：写一篇文章，讨论你同意或反对这个说法达到什么程度，并解释你选择这个观点的理由。在展开和支持你的观点时，你需要考虑这个说法可能在哪些方面成立或者不成立，并解释你所考虑的这些东西如何体现你的观点]

指导

本题讨论对个人行为负责相关的问题，题目认为个人行为并非是自己可以决定的，更多得是被外界左右。本题改编自老GRE的ISSUE93"The concept of 'individual responsibility' is a necessary fiction. Although societies must hold individuals accountable for their own actions, people's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making"，和老GRE的ISSUE156"Choice is an illusion. In reality, our lives are controlled by the society in which we live"有互通之处。在分析的过程中，可以从个人责任的意义以及是否必要，影响个人行为的因素，外界对个人行为的影响方面和具体形式、程度等方面展开思考。

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1. 如果不存在“个人责任”这个概念，人们的学习、工作、生活以及整个社会的发展都会出现哪些问题？请举例并简述。

回答：如果没有这一概念，人们的任何行为都会以满足自己的最大利益为出发点，由此造成社会秩序的混乱。社会中的老人很可能得不到号的赡养，儿童也不能得到有效保护。

2. 让个人为自己的行为负责对于社会有哪些好处？请举例并简述。

回答：能使社会在良好有序的状态下发展，各部门分工明确，社会各部分有条不紊运行。如：家长都履行自己应尽的义务，于是就不会出现辍学儿童这样的现象

3. 人们的行为都受到哪些因素的影响？请举例并简述。（可从内因、外因两方面分别考虑）

回答：内因：私欲；外因：来自家庭、社会、工作等上的压力迫使

4. 外界因素在哪些情况下以何种方式影响着人们的行为？请举例并简述。

回答：外界因素用法律条款和道德约束等规范人们的行为，使其不对他们的利益造成损害，使每个人都平等，同时也保护个人权益。如在公司中工作，既能受到公司的福利，同时也必须遵守公司的各项条款

5. 人们是否可以不顾外界环境的影响而进行自己的选择？如果可以，请举例；如果不可以，请解释原因。

回答：不可以。首先，这样可能会得不到自己想要的结果，比如在下雨天晾衣服势必晾不干；其次，这样可能会给他人的利益造成损伤；另外，还会引起他们的谴责

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作文

We human often consider ourselves as dominant force of the world,and there is nothing we cannot achieve.It seems that we can behave however we like to.In fact,there are a variety of factors that determine our behaviors,and we can do nothing to change them.Human are forced by what we cannot decide because we are not isolated individuals.We live in a society that everyone has his responsibility in it.
In the first place,human are born different in our abilities to do something.Some people have natural talent in terms of art,music or sports,while some find that no matter how hard they try,they cannot achieve their goals.It is known to all that African are genious in athletics.In most Olimpic Games,African sportsmen win most golden metals in terms of athletic.In contrast,Asian sportsmen rarely do excellent in such field though their hardworking is not less than that of African.Our variance in nature and genes means that we cannot do whatever we like to.
In the second place,our roles in society mean that we must shoulder certain responsibility.From the day we are born out,we firstly play a role of a son or daughter of our parents.At the same time,the burden of taking care of them falls on our shoulders.As we grow up and become adults,we should take over the responsibility of our parents.If we neglect our responsibility,there is neither people taking care of children nor looking after the older.Consequently,our society will become a mass.
Last but not least, the nature is capable to determine and change our environment without any reason.For example,it is likely that when we are about to go out for a picnic,it is raining heavily outside.No matter how technology is,though we can enjoy many advantages from it,we can never transcend nature's force.Many disasters we can never expect or prevent make us suffer a lot of loss.We will never have the ability to control nature.

We can not deny that Human have freedom to make most choices in live,and our future is hold in ourselves' hands to a large extent.Many celebrities earn their happy live through their own hardworking.
We are limited by many rules to ensure that we cannot harm others' right.Only in this situation can we live in a fairly society and our right can exist under protection.

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