GRE 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:Eric Tony
The general welfare of a nation's people is a better indication of that nation's greatness than are the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists. [Specific Task Instruction: Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.]
题目分析
翻译
国家中所有人民的福利是体现国家伟大程度最真实的一个体现,而不是其统治者、艺术家或者科学家的成就。[说明:写一篇文章,讨论你同意或反对这个主张达到什么程度。在展开和支持你的观点时,一定要处理那些最有说服力的理由和/或例子,它们可能被用来挑战你的观点]
指导
本题改编自老GRE的ISSUE170"The surest indicator of a great nation is not the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but the general welfare of all its people"。题目讨论国家伟大的体现形式问题,题目认为相对于个人成就,全面福利才是国家伟大的最真实体现。在分析的过程中,可以从统治者、艺术家、科学家的个人成就以及全民福利都可以展现国家哪些方面的内容,这些展现的表现形式、彼此之间的关系以及概括性、真实性等方面展开思考。需要注意: 1、无论在论述统治者、艺术家、科学家的成就还是全民福利,论点都应该在讨论的是the surest indicator; 2、题目给出的是achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists而不是国家的艺术科技政治水平,分析要针对某人的 achievement; 3、对于此题这种对比型的题目,需要注意不应孤立得去分析二者各自的利弊,而是应当将二者放在一起通过对比、类比等方法将差异展现出来,这样才能说明哪个更好。
1. 请列举历史上的几个伟大国家、这些国家统治者、艺术家、科学家的成就以及全民福利情况。并分析这些内容在我们了解这些国家的过程中起到的作用。
回答: In Chinese history, Qin dynasty is one of the most renowned times without any doubts. The first emperor of Qin conquered other five countries and achieved his great ambition of unifying the mainland of China. He not only conquered in violence but also combined different types of cultures in China and firstly formed and established the unique official words and the currency in Chinese history. According to what listed above, the first emperor of Qin successfully set up the initial feudal empire of China, which is permanently recorded by later generations and prevalently admired by later emperors. Li Bing, one of the magistrates in Sichuan Province at that time, was also a talent hydraulician in charge of the Dujiang Weir Project. Without any modernized facilities and auto-machines, without any western science knowledge, he successfully built the weir and irrigation system at Dujiang area just depending on Chinese traditional engineering experiences and creative design process.
2. 统治者、艺术家或者科学家的成就和国家伟大程度之间的关系都有哪些?请结合具体国家、人物以及其成就分析并简述。
回答: The rulers' achievements at some certain cases build upon the sacrifice of the laboring people, which means that such success acts against the greatness of the country. The first emperor of Qin Dynasty was a man restrictive to his people, forcing the general to realize his own ambition of conquering the world. Though his military was impregnable at the very beginning of the time, the laboring mass of Qin continued to rally against the government and to conduct revolutions for human rights. The country where its people had no basic rights and lost essential sense of safety was not a place of absolute greatness.
3. 全民福利和国家伟大程度之间的关系有哪些?请结合具体国家和当时的全民福利情况分析并简述。
回答: As to the cases like Dujiang Weir Project, the local citizens' living levels at that time were greatly improved than the situations before the civil war in China. And Sichuan has been recognized as one of Chinese most fertilized and affluent provinces since Qin Dynasty. Depending on such affluency, Sichuan was regarded as the special granary, where people cultivated foods and produced textile used for general living supply and military supply. And Qin Dynasty maintained its hegemony for nearly half a century.
4. 同全民福利相比,统治者、艺术家或者科学家的成就在反映国家是否伟大的时候,是否存在局限性或者不合理的地方?如果没有,为什么?如果有,请举例并简述。
回答: Compared with general welfare, the achievements of rulers and scientists not only prove the greatness of the country,but also reflect the limitations and irrationality of the time. Qin Dynasty is admired as the most invincible empire in Chinese history while also reputed as the cruelest and most ruthless one.Centralization, caught out by the emperor and achieved by ruthless methods, was focused on standardizing legal codes and bureaucratic procedures, the forms of writing and coinage, and the pattern of thought and scholarship.Millions of humans were forced to build up the Great Wall, the historic defending facility of China. There is an old-saying going like that the wall is lying just on the innumerous dead bodies who used to build it.
5. 还有哪些标准或者条件可以反映国家的伟大程度?这些内容同全民福利相比,有哪些优势和不足?是否全民福利是对国家伟大程度最真实的反映?
回答: People's essential sense of safety and happiness. People wealthy and live in harmony. People highly educated and have affluent cultures and technology.Show great achievements in art, literature, science.--> high spirit quality of life,more enjoyable life beyond the foundamental needs of surviving. Show high rate of developing and high speed productivity.--> high level of civilization--> greater possibility of high level material quality of life. The general welfare, in some extent, is able to reflect the affluency of the material quality of people's lives, but is not convictive as to the spirit fields, which is also a indispensable to senior society.
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