TOEFL 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:Hleb
【IBT机经-1】Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: In order to succeed, you should be more like others than be different from everyone else.
题目分析
翻译
你是否同意下述观点:为了成功,你更应该变得和其他人一样而不是与众不同。
指导
题目讨论为了成功应该怎样做的问题。题目中的前提条件是“获得成功“,给出了”如果人们变得和其他人相似就会取得成功“的判断。题目不难理解,和成功有关的实例也不胜枚举,分析题目和拓展写作思路时应该注意以下2点:1、明确自己的观点,到底是同意还是不同意;2、论述中要始终和”获得成功“与”自己和他人的关系“相关联,切忌脱离了题目的前提是”获得成功“。
1. 在我们的日常生活和社会历史中,获得成功的人都应该具备那些素质?这些成功人士是和其他人一样呢还是与众不同呢?请结合实例简述。
回答: 1要充满激情2有灵感3持之以恒4专注。与众不同
2. 成功人士的身上,哪些特点是具有普遍性的?那些特质是具有特殊性的?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: 1要充满激情2有灵感3持之以恒4专注 有灵感这个是具有特殊型的,如乔布斯的苹果公司就是一个典型的例子
3. 变得和大家相似会出现哪些结果?在什么情况下有助于成功?什么情况下不利于成功?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: 可能会变得平庸。在不违背常理的情况下
4. 变得和大家不同有哪些结果?在什么情况下有利于成功?什么情况下不利于成功?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: 可能会遇到更大的阻力和质疑。在社会被平庸所占据时容易获得成功。
5. 变得和他人一样也好,不一样也罢,对成功究竟能起到多大的作用?为了获得成功,除了题目中涉及的那方面问题,还需要那些优秀的品质呢?请结合实例简述。
回答: 自律,以及自控力。
其他用户的回答
作文
To be successful in life, one should have the characteristic of being different , that is, he/she has the ability to change people commonly think. Through being different from others, one is capable of gaining some idiosyncratic opinions,concentrating on the right taget, thereby making a wise decision.
Tradional ways of thinking are treatures which will prevent us from wasting time and energy on trial things. Naturally to make new contributions in any field of study, scholars and scients should first master the existing work done by their fellow scholars and scientists.  There is no doubt that sometimes we should draw on the experience of others in order to make up something. It seems to be a short step from imitating to creating. However, think different from others have more effect on creating new things than being more like others. In other words, we can create nothing if we are only confined to the conventional experience.
In addition, those people who succeed in their fields behave more like being different from others. Stephen King, an American author of comtemporary horror, science,and fiction,his early inspiration derived from a experience that he witnessed one of his friends being struck and killed by a train. Some commentators have suggested that this event may have psychologically inspired some of King's works. Furthermore the success of apple computer corporation indicates the view strongly. Steve Jobs, who was the co-founder of apple computer inc,behaved more like himself than being like others introduced the long-anticipated iphone that changed the world and the way of life.
In sum, I disagree with the though that in order to succeed people should be more like others than be different from everyone else. Although we sometimes need to learn something by repeate the predecessor's work, we should not forget to being different.  

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