TOEFL 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:Shelley
【IBT机经-41】Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Parents should give school-age children money for high grade they get in school.
题目分析
翻译
你是否同意下述观点:家长应该给上学的孩子钱来奖励他们在学校取得的高分。
指导
题目关于家庭教育,讨论的是钱能否作为奖励孩子的重要手段。一般来说,考试是用来检验学生阶段性学习效果的重要手段,考试成绩作为一个客观结果而存在,具有偶然性。用钱来奖励学生取得的好成绩,一方面有可能促进学生再接再厉,另一方面也有可能导致学生为了获取金钱而故意作弊以获得高分的恶果。所以,在分析这个题目的时候应该注意三个问题:1、考试的作用和考试成绩的重要性;2、把钱和考试成绩结合,会带来哪些积极和消极影响;3、其他的奖励学生取得好成绩的方法有哪些。
1. 请结合时代环境,谈谈钱在这个社会的重要作用以及人们的金钱观?
回答: 钱可以满足人们的日常需求,可以用钱去看电影,去放松自己
2. 学生参加考试的重要作用是什么呢?请结合实际简述。
回答: 提升自己并且检测学习成果。
3. 请结合实际简述,金钱是如何发挥它的激励作用的?
回答: 学生都有很多兴趣爱好,有地喜欢看电影有的喜欢旅游,如果有钱,他们可以满足这些爱好,并且为了得到钱而付出努力
4. 有人说,题目中的方法会增加孩子们学习的功利性,不利于孩子的健康成长,你是否赞同?请结合实际简述你的理由。
回答: 不赞同,我认为适当的经济鼓励可以激励孩子们的学习积极性
5. 除了金钱的奖励方法,你认为还有哪些方法能够有效地奖励孩子们在学校的优异表现?请结合实际简述。
回答: 送给孩子礼物
其他用户的回答
作文
Nowadays, more and more parents are gradually beginning to pay attention to students study. They use various ways to encourage children working hard. The most direct way they usually utilize is giving appropriate financial incentives when children get high grade in school. When it comes to the issue about whether parents should give students money for high grade they get in school or not, peoples' opinion differs from person to person and culture to culture.Some prefer to define money as encouragement for children, while others may choose to think that money will mislead children on the contrary. On personal level, I support the prior one for reasons of inspiring students working hard in school and developing children's various abilities.

Recently, the ability of students concentrating on classes has caused public concern. Unfortunately, people find that hardly can the new generation listen to teachers carefully. It is students lacking an incentive to study that lead to this situation. Therefore, we are tempted to ask ourselves: Isn't it necessary for parents to take a measure to help children in study? Isn't it important for parents to improve children's enthusiasm for study? Isn't it compulsory for parents to give children money for high grade they get in school? Obviously money can play an effective role in stimulating students to further efforts. Even a little kid needs money to buy something toys.Consequently, parents needs to use financial incentive to encourage students to work hard.
Children's various abilities comes next only to the importance of learning motivation. That is giving money to children appropriately can develop children's various abilities not only academic abilities. We can easily quote a single example to illustrate this. Just imagine that a children likes photography. If the children get some money from their parents, he or she can use the money to buy a camera he or she has been desired for a long time. Then he can take beautiful photos in free time, maybe he will be a photographer in the future. Examples like this happen everywhere. A survey conducted by a large company in 10 major cities in China shows that over eighty percentage of students feels that they are lacking of opportunities to follow their hobbies. So it is high time that we take various abilities into account the next time we evaluate the money given children for high grade.
It is true that money may has negative influence on children. Some children may spend money on computer games and then become addicted to games. However, if children own some money under parents' appropriate supervision, money can be benefit students as well.
In short, from what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that it is better for parents to give children money for high grade they get in school. Only in this way can students obtain high enthusiasm of studying as soon as possible and various abilities.

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