TOEFL 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:冯雪湖
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child's success in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
题目分析
翻译
你认为对孩子在学习上的成绩优秀,同学比家长给的影响更重大吗?用具体的理由和例子来支持你的观点。
指导
比较孩子在学习上受同学和家长影响的程度,看是不是前者比后者影响更大,可以从影响的途径入手进行论述。
1. 学习过程中,你是跟同学交流得多,还是父母教导得多?你觉得哪种方式让你更容易接受?
回答: 和同学的交流多,和同学在一起更容易接受
2. 你的同学对你的学习起着怎样的作用?他们是怎样影响你学习的?
回答: 可以帮助我学习,帮我排忧解难,可以一起学习。他们可以促进我
3. 父母在孩子的学习生活中扮演着怎样的角色?举例说明。
回答: 扮演着家长,考不好了会被叫家长
其他用户的回答
作文
  Many people prefer to parents are a more important influence than classmate on a child's success in school because of many conditions. However,with parents have less time than classmate in school study to, they can help my study as soon as posible.The following essay wil demonstrate why classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child's success in school.
   Classmates encourage me that faced every challenges. The story is not unique, it is one of many examples. Last time, I lost my finall examnation of mathmatic and upset about it, my classmates said:" That be ok! don't give up, You just need work hard on you mathmatic, do more exercise, and you will get better scores." After that I got good work of mathmatic.Thanks to  my classmates encourage me,I have nerver renouce my study.
   Furthermore, I can study from my classmat's modle of think. On account of we have similar think and the same age, while we need to work with different people. There is good evidence to show that we planed a project, everyone have own opition,some of them are right,while, others are wrong, I can study all of them, they are my example. Study with classmats help me that know the team spirit.
    Moreover, classmates remind me in school. we study together and they know every projects or notices. When I don't pay more attention about that, they will tell me. Classmates help me all the time in school.
    Although, parents influence me too, but I still believe that classmates are more important influence than parents on a child's success in school.
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