TOEFL 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:黄子晏
If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
题目分析
翻译
如果你可以改变你家乡的一个重要方面,你会改变什么?用具体的理由和例子支持你的观点。
指导
题目让我们设想改变家乡的某一重要方面,重点在于说明选择改变这个方面的理由。比如卫生方面的问题,它影响着家乡的市容,市民们的健康等。
1. 你的家乡在哪儿?你不喜欢家乡的哪些方面?为什么?
回答: 交通堵塞,上学上班不方便,很拥挤,浪费了大量的时间。 缺少绿色的大自然,难以呼吸到清新的空气。
2. 家乡存在这个问题的原因是什么?
回答: 经济发展,各种高楼大厦拔地而起,道路拥挤。 私家车的增加,出行很不方便。
3. 应该怎么改进这个方面,具体的措施是什么?
回答: 车辆限行,增加绿化。
其他用户的回答
作文
great changes have taken place in my hometown since before, like most people can take their own cars to work, whereas people living in the past can only ride bicycles towards their destination. however, accompanying this great change is the ensuing problems which lead to some harmful situations. if i were a mayor of the city, the most important thing i would have changed first is the traffic jam.my reasons are as follows.
first of all, most people get annoyed in the swarm of cars and people, which take them so many time to wait. if you were in my hometown, you would have been shocked by large numbers of cars filling the street during the rush hour.therefore, people lose their time to get work done and to go home for dinner. an illustrating example was my experience with so many automobiles accompanying with me, and we even have been waiting for 3 hours till everything has done. from that time, an thought came into my mind that this circumstance should be altered some day soon. if not, what changes bring us are not just benefits, but a series of harmful phenomena which could result in some uncomfortable problems just as headache.
second, since the rapid advance of city's traffic, nature has kept away from us on the contrary, people walking down the street could not see lots of green trees like before. what's worse, the amount of harmful gases has risen up to a peak, for example, everyone knows that ozone hole, so if more and more automobiles keep discharging the greenhouse gases such as CO2, our earth will become warmer which leads to the rise of sea level. similarly, gas like CO from vent-pipe  could cause severer disease,let alone NO,nowadays, not only my hometown,improving city's traffic has aroused public's concern,and many city managers are sparing no effort to lose down the burden of our traffic.
from my personally perspective,as a city designer, one thing i could have down is resist the personal car's use. for example, many large cities start to execute the policy that people are allowed to make use of their cars at specific time. additionally, more trees should be planted at two sides of the road,which could fetch us more fresh air.and if everyone could take the responsibility of building the city, my hometown's future will be better and brighter
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