GRE 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:简穹
[Claim] In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years. [Reason] The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership. [Specific Task Instruction: Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.]
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翻译
[观点] 在任何领域——商业,政治,教育,政府——那些领导者在五年以后都应该下台。 [理由] 通过新的领导者来引发新的活力是让事业获得成功的最有效的方法。 [说明] 写一篇文章,讨论你同意或反对这个观点,以及支持观点的理由达到怎样的程度。
指导
本题改编自老GRE的ISSUE70"In any profession—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years. The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership"。题目的论述默认了一个前提,即在五年内,领导者会让所在的单位缺乏活力。因此,你以从几个方面来进行思考:一是造成事业缺乏生机和活力的原因有哪些,二是通过更换领导是否一定会给事业注入新的活力,三是有哪些方法会给事业带来新的变革和活力,四是更换领导者在哪些行业会带来新的活力。这个题目重点是论述领导者和一项事业是否具有活力之间的关系,不要纠结于类似“五年”这样的数据中,当然,也可以就“五年”是否会让一个单位失去活力,而更换领导是否可以解决来发表看法。
1. 描述一个曾经很辉煌,而后来失去了活力的机构(企业,政府等),并分析它失去活力的原因。这些原因是否与领导者有关系?
回答: 摩托罗拉公司,曾发明了大众化的BP机,全球第一款无线移动电话,历史上第一款折叠手机。二战期间,摩托罗拉的SCR300步话机伴随着诺曼底登陆的成功而闻名世界。1966年,人类第一次登月,宇航员阿姆斯特朗在月球上说出那句“这是个人的一小步,但却是人类的一大步”时,用的就是摩托罗拉通信设备。 摩托罗拉一直以技术著称。但是,其公司内部封闭的工程师文化太重,没能适应手机市场由技术驱动向市场拉动的大势。 与领导者也是有关系的。1987年的铱星计划, 耗时11年,投资50多亿美元后,1998年,这个全球首个大型低轨卫星通信系统,也是全球最大的无线通信系统运营。铱星曾在科索沃战争、台湾大地震时使用过。但庞大的前期投资和每年几亿美元的设备维护费用,使得铱星手机收费高昂,不再是面对老百姓的产品,2000年公司宣布破产保护时才发展了两万多客户。 华尔街和投资者不断指责加尔文家族创始人的孙子克里斯托夫·加尔文“没有制定出一个清晰的战略”。
2. 导致事业失去活力的原因有哪些?哪些原因跟领导者有关系?有什么关系?请举例说明。
回答: 原因:1)不能适应外界。需要领导者有预测和观察能力。e.g. 摩托罗拉,仍然以技术为重心,不考虑市场。不能指定清晰的战略。 2)缺乏决断能力。能够斩断诱惑,才能够保证专注,只有专注的精力,才能比别人钻研更深。e.g.摩托罗拉在2008年时,桑杰·贾刀阔斧地削减手机平台的数量,停止生产上一任CEO遗留下来的10余款未上市手机,制定出了专注谷歌Android平台的终端策略。此前,占领市场的系统是symbian,摩托罗拉在android只是个小罗罗,但是很快Android市场占有率已超过50%。
3. 更换新的领导会给事业发展带来什么好处和什么弊端?在一定时间内更换领导对哪些行业更有好处?请举例说明。
回答: 1)带来新的思维。 2)改革之前的弊端。 1)在思维容易僵化的地方。企业,很容易骄傲自满。 2)在容易产生利益集团的地方。e.g.政府
4. 对一个领导者的领导水平的评判应该考虑哪些因素?是否能因为企业失去了活力就让他/她下台?请举例说明。
回答: 1)观察能力 2)决断能力 3)应该下台,如果百姓或股东已经没有别的办法了。
5. 要让事业充满活力,可以有哪些手段和方法?请举例说明。
回答: 1)内部改革。很难。
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作文
In my point of view, no matter in any field, periodical revitalization of leadership is necessary for every enterprise, especially when it comes into trouble. However, the length of tenure varies in different fields.
 
For the first reason, not every leadership is omnipotent and omniscient. Surrounding by the fast-changing peripheral environment, they have to revise their management prudently from time to time. This spirit of self-overhauling is so in need to redeem the mistakes and avoid coming dangers timely. In 2008, because of their inadvertence of the fallible design in subprime loan, the Bush government failed to forebode the financial crisis.
 
However, although it is necessary to recheck periodically, it is hard for old leadership to do so. Because their ossified mind, leaders often fail to realize the impending danger. A best example to illustrate this is Motorola. It used to be the best-known vanguard telecom company, by developing the first beeper, mobile phone, and clamshell cell phone. However, paying too much attention on technology kills the company. Three generations of Motor's family leadership has cultivated an atmosphere of tech-awning, resulting to neglecting of the marketing-oriented trend in 21st Century. In 1990s, without an overall clear understanding on the marketing demand, Motorola mistakenly missed the opportunity to develop GSM, a new communicating system. It's marketing share slipped from 70% to 25% in 2005.
Secondly, even if they are wary enough to overhaul the leadership on time, it is hard to conduct a reform or amendment, balked by nepotism, cronyism or embarrassment on conceding his or her mistakes. For instance, Firing an ineptitude subordinate who is faithful, or rather more a relative usually seems inclement to a leader and therefore he or she would give the subordinate another chance. However, to a new leader who is not hampered by the relationships, changing a new canny subordinate. The latter way is proved to be more efficient. Success of U.S.’s governing substantiates it. A systemized stepping down of the president has effectively assured only those who is mostly sincere and mostly capable to lead American people can be inaugurated. For instance, seeing George Bush and his coterie being boggled in the quagmire for so many years, the U.S people superseded him with Obama, who rebuilt a wholly new management group and finally retracted soldiers from Iraq War.
 
But is revitalization of leadership the surest path to success? Many would argue that employee's expertise, their enthusiasm, as well as ambience of the company may also play vital roles. For instance, the ambience of inactive and indolent can destroy a company. No matter how potent a leader is, he can not do all the jobs personally. However, if the leader can instinct his or her employee’s passion, no matter through his personable and amiable charisma, or by enhancing bonus, the company might be saved.
 
Therefore, my opinion is that, all the factors influencing an enterprise are determined by leadership. A wise leader pays highly attention on enacting strategies and institutionalizing everything. The former ensures a right direction on the company, including establishment of culture ambience, product strategy for the next decades and so on. The latter helps the enterprise to run well in every aspects, from staff training and motivation, to brand building.
 
Finally, five years should not be a stipulation for the tenure. Since a revitalization of leadership inevitably brings into disfavoring byproducts, such as friction between new leadership and original inner environment etc., how frequent the revitalization should be depends on the enterprise’s forbearance on these cost. However, this varies in different fields. In the field of education, as the environment is more stable, the tenure of a leader could be longer.
 
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