GRE 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:Cecillia
The effectiveness of a country's leaders is best measured by examining the well-being of that country's citizens. [Specific Task Instruction: Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.]
题目分析
翻译
一个国家领导人的效力可以通过调查该国公民的幸福程度来被最好地衡量。[说明:写一篇文章,讨论你同意或反对这个主张达到什么程度。在展开和支持你的观点时,一定要处理那些最有说服力的理由和/或例子,它们可能被用来挑战你的观点]
指导
本题讨论有效的国家领导与公民幸福程度之间的关系。题目有两个易混信息点:effectiveness和well-being of that country's citizens,两个正面的词用来形容同一个人,就像是现在的父母总是对孩子说:“你长大之后要出人头地,现在就要好好学习”。但是,是否一定要让人民幸福才算是领导有能力?由此即可展开对本题的思路,相对来说反对题目的写法是大家经常采用的。此题难点在于对“effectiveness”和“well-being of that country's citizens”的解释和衔接,以及对“best measured”的阐述上,在分析的时候需要注意。
1. 如何评价领导是否有效?在一位领导会涉及的各个方面,有效是以什么样的形式表现出来的?是否存在一个衡量的标准?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: 评价一个领导的指标是涉及多方面的,毫无疑问百姓的安乐是一个重要的指标,但并不是最好的更不是唯一的指标。对于一个国家的领导人来说,制定政策的能力、在外交方面展现出的风采和力量、个人的性格特征以及对人民的关心程度都是衡量他能力的指标。如果只考虑人民的幸福这方面,就算领导考虑得再周到,社会上的不同人群还是会有不同的感受,例如如果领导倾向于保护企业的利益,就很可能损害消费者的利益,而如果领导给弱势群体更多的基金,那么其他群体势必也会受到负面的影响。那么那些负面的声音并不一定就代表领导的效力很低,因为他的目标不是让所有的人都满意,而是让更多的人满意。因此评价一个领导,需要考虑多方面的因素,而不是只考虑一个方面,以偏概全。overgeneralization。
2. 哪些因素决定或影响了一国的公民是否幸福安康?请举例并简述。
回答: 而一国公民的well-being也不是只由领导来决定的,一个人的well-being除了受到大环境方面的国家整体政策的影响,还会受到自己周围环境的影响,例如自己的工作,和上司以及同事的关系,社会地位,家庭关系以及自己的心理感知等等因素影响。有时候并不是领导制定了反映人民利益的政策,人民就一定会幸福的。例如一些发达国家,瑞士、日本等,国家的福利很好,人民生活水平也很高,但是同时自杀率也很高。可见这两者并不存在因果的关系。
3. 领导的效力由哪些因素共同决定?这些因素中哪些是最关键的?
回答: 领导的效力由他自身的能力、性格特点,以及和他一起公事的同事,整个国际环境局势,国内现状等等因素决定,而其中最关键的是他自己的能力和气质。
4. 除了“公民幸福程度”以外,还有哪些其他内容可以体现或衡量一个国家领导人的效力?请分析并简述。
回答: 除了公民幸福程度,还有整个国家的经济发展状况,文化开放程度,人民素质,外交实力以及政治清明情况等等内容可以体现一个国家领导人的效力。例如我们在评价古代帝王的时候,就拿中国的唐明皇来说吧,我们会提到他让国家经济发展,政治清明,民族政策开明,外交关系良好等等来评价他,而不会只关注人们的幸福感。
5. 问题四中其他的衡量标准和公民幸福程度相比,在衡量国家领导人的效力的过程中,哪个更好?为什么?
回答: 和公民的幸福程度相比,我甚至认为国家的经济发展状况更重要。因为公民的幸福感还涉及到人本身感知的作用,也许有的人天生更容易感觉幸福,也许有的人就总是不满意现状。领导让国家成功发展,但是却左右不了人们自我的感受。然后经济发展状况却不一样,这是更实际而可见的,能快速而真实地反映出领导人的决策与筹划能力。另外,很多社会学和经济学的研究调查显示,社会经济地位和人们的幸福感是呈现正相关的,经济条件好了自然觉得幸福。因此经济状况通常在很大程度上能反映一个国家的实力与发展,当然也能反映领导的效力。
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作文
Undoubtedly, the well-being of a country's citizens is a important and reasonable indicator of the effectiveness of a country' leaders. However, when evaluating the effectiveness of a country's leaders, more factors should be taken into consideration. It is possible that some other factors' importance will outstrip people's well-being's.
First, there will be some disadvantages if the well-being of the citizens is the only index considered. Everyone has different sense of well-being. And in most occasions, the effectiveness of leaders in a country has noting to do to effect people's sensation of well-being. Commonsensically, people live in a more prosperous country are feeling more happiness than those of a poor country, but this truth is actually not consistent with that thought. In some developed countries, such as France, Italy and Japan, the suicide rate are amazingly high. From the development level of these country, we can hardly deny the effectiveness of their leaders, while the well-being of their people can not reflect the leaders' merits and achievements.
In fact, the evaluation towards leaders of a country should encompass many indices. The development of the country is a important factor which can not be ignored, and the reliability of policies concerning about racial ,gender and vulnerable groups issues formulated by the leaders can also demonstrate their intelligence. Also, decent diplomacies will win some scores for the leaders. Last but not least, the characteristics and personal chrisma of the leaders sometimes can be a significant factor for their estimation. Take the emperor of Tang dynasty in ancient China as an example, when people think about him, usually his right policies towards the development of the whole country and ethnic issues are considered. Moreover, people will remember his decent diplomatic style and his own overwhelming chrisma, which made him one of the greatest emperor in ancient China's history.
Leaders' effectiveness can be influenced by many factors other than the only reflection of the well-being of a country's people. While it is the same with the well-being of the public, people's sense of happiness can be affected by many factors likewise. Every person lives in a complicated social environment and establishes many relationship networks. Not only the country and the leaders' actions can have influence on them, but also the smaller social environment such as the working place and their peers can impact them. Even if leaders give their people priority without reservation, some people will not feel happy if their bosses always find fault with them or their family members are in ailments. Obviously, the effectiveness of leaders can not necessarily lead to people's well-being. Therefore, the well-being of a country's people can not be regarded as the best measurement.
Comparing to take the well-being of country's people as the best indicator to evaluate leaders effectiveness, I would rather recommend to give the development of a country's economy priority. The economic development is far more visible and pragmatic, everyone can clearly witness a country' development, which owns a large scale to leaders' effectiveness. Dating back to the American Great Depression, the New Deal of Theodore Roosevelt let people pick up the lost confidence, which definitely can be attributed to his effectiveness.
Although the well-being of a country's citizen is a important index that can not be neglected to estimate the effectiveness of the country's leaders, there is a urgent need to take many other factor into consideration. And the development a country's economy, for instance, may be the most significant index.
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