GRE 作文题目
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People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making. [Specific Task Instruction: Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.]
题目分析
翻译
人们的行为很大程度上是由自己不能驾驭的力量决定的。[说明：写一篇文章，讨论你同意或反对这个说法达到什么程度，并解释你选择这个观点的理由。在展开和支持你的观点时，你需要考虑这个说法可能在哪些方面成立或者不成立，并解释你所考虑的这些东西如何体现你的观点]
指导
本题讨论对个人行为负责相关的问题，题目认为个人行为并非是自己可以决定的，更多得是被外界左右。本题改编自老GRE的ISSUE93"The concept of 'individual responsibility' is a necessary fiction. Although societies must hold individuals accountable for their own actions, people's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making"，和老GRE的ISSUE156"Choice is an illusion. In reality, our lives are controlled by the society in which we live"有互通之处。在分析的过程中，可以从个人责任的意义以及是否必要，影响个人行为的因素，外界对个人行为的影响方面和具体形式、程度等方面展开思考。
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1. 如果不存在“个人责任”这个概念，人们的学习、工作、生活以及整个社会的发展都会出现哪些问题？请举例并简述。
回答：
对于学习过程，学习成果满不在乎，学习效率底下。工作没有动力和激情，容易造成事故。为所欲为，不在意后果和可能的危害，社会发展不稳定，人人把责任推给他人。如果没有社会责任：人们学习，没有动力，没有目标，不能为社会所用，甚至根本不愿意学习，整个社会的文化素质都降低；工作中，没有按照一定的规章制度，会危机到集体的收益甚至生命安全；生活中，如果不讲责任，父母不对子女负责，子女无视年迈的家长将使得整个社会道德沦丧。总之，整个社会的经济发展，道德发展等等各个方面都需要有个人责任整个概念才能统一协调好。 如果没有个人责任，学习工作将变得漫无目的，难以达到更好的效果。没有学习的动力，科技难以得到发展，没有工作责任，社会的正常功能难以维持。
2. 让个人为自己的行为负责对于社会有哪些好处？请举例并简述。
回答：
1.提高效率。每个人各司其职，完成自己的任务，履行自己的责任，每一个个人的完成了，个人所组成的集体也就可以完成任务，从而提高效率。 2.增加约束。负责是自己保证自己的行为受到一定的约束，从而不破坏已有的社会规律。社会效率提高了，每个个体的行为收到了约束，最终可以达到社会稳定。
由王雷雷于2012-04-20 18:58添加
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每个人都为自己行为负责有三点好处 1.责任约束个人行为，让人充分思考利弊去做事，容易获得个人成功 2.为社会其他成员树立榜样，给社会风气良好的影响 3.使得整个社会有序高效的运转。
由尚晶于2012-04-18 14:06添加
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对社会负责会增强我的自信心和社会荣誉感，不会让我觉得自己是一个没用的人，面对生活会更加的积极。并且，人人都会为自己的行为负责会使社会治理减轻很多压力，比如人人都维护环境的话，生活环境就会有很大的改善。
3. 人们的行为都受到哪些因素的影响？请举例并简述。（可从内因、外因两方面分别考虑）
回答：
内因：世界观，价值观。影响人处理事物的思维模式及准则，从而影响其所控制的行为。外因：社会环境，家庭环境。家庭环境形成不同的世界观以及价值观，社会大环境影响每一个小的家庭环境。
由王雷雷于2012-04-20 19:00添加
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内因：个人的目标和野心，个人能力的大小约束，个人性格 外因：社会团体的规章制度约束，社会的法律约束，道德约束，实际所处的周围环境，家庭背景影响，民族的历史背景，风俗习惯，教育背景，社会上模范的带头、跟风。
由尚晶于2012-04-18 14:07添加
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内因，自己内心需求的影响，比如人都有惰性，如果在本职工作的时候惰性太大，导致不能很好的完成工作，就有可能拖累同事，影响整体工作的进度。外因，可能受到教育，舆论，法律等的影响，比如对待父母家人恶劣就可能会受到社会舆论的谴责，而犯法的话还会受到法律的制裁。
4. 外界因素在哪些情况下以何种方式影响着人们的行为？请举例并简述。
回答：
社会环境影响着家庭环境，教育环境，二者是每个个人形成世界观、价值观的基础，又间接指导人的行为。比如
由王雷雷于2012-04-20 19:03添加
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1.所处环境周围他人的潜移默化的影响，比如室友的影响 2.所处的社会背景下的影响，比如道德法律约束
由尚晶于2012-04-18 14:11添加
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可以从舆论方面，社会的舆论会给人的心理造成压力，如果外界舆论阻力很大的话可能会让人的行为进行的很困难。也可以从教育方面，如果行为同普遍已定的价值观相差很大的话，就有可能受到老师或者家长的教育。也可以从法律方面进行强制约束，违法行为会受到相关部门的审判和惩罚。
5. 人们是否可以不顾外界环境的影响而进行自己的选择？如果可以，请举例；如果不可以，请解释原因。
回答：
不可以。上述。
由王雷雷于2012-04-20 19:03添加
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在民主社会仿佛是可以完全自我选择，但实际上并不可以不顾外界环境选择。表面上看个人的具有很强的独立思考，具有批判思维能力就可以自己掌握命运，但是不可以挖全不顾。因为人生活在群体之中，在影响到了他人的生活状态时，必须要对自己的行为控制。这也是为何有法律和道德的原因。
由尚晶于2012-04-18 14:15添加
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可以的。因为外界影响大部分都是从心理上对人造成压抑抑制影响，如果自己的意识够强硬够坚决还是有可能进行选择的。比如商场上有好多孤注一掷的案例，人一时冲动犯下大错的例子也有很多。
其他用户的回答
作文
背景:
Recently, there has been a debate on wether people should follow the regular social regulation or follow there own hearts. Some people hold the opinion that it is the forces from outside, rather than inner force, that determine people's behavior. Some people believe that people's activitey are mainly directed by their own minds.
观点:
As far as I am concerned, I believe that people's activities are restricted under different kind of regulations, which are not made by themselves.
主体
理由 :
The society people live in today is full of different focres, rules, and regulations, no matter in which country people live. For example , the students have to obey the rules of the in school. A college student will not receive his or her diploma without finishing the requried courses and obtaining enough credits. If one society lack of basic forces and laws to control people's behavior, the society will fall into disordered.
理由 :
If people don't care about the outside world and concentrate to much to themselves, it is likely that the society will lack of the respectation cooperation among the people.
理由 :
People's behavior is determined by multiple forces which can not be decided by themselves. For example, the enviroment one person grows un in is determined by one's family, nationality and enthnic culture.
结尾
让步:
Although certain forces that come from one's herat will help that person to achieve his or her goal, such as the self confidence. At the same time, people have to be guided by the laws and rules in the society.
总结:
To sum up, the world people live in is full of regulations and connections. One single person can not survive in an absence of restriction.
Recently, there has been a debate on wether people should follow the regular social regulation or follow there own hearts. Some people hold the opinion that it is the forces from outside, rather than inner force, that determine people's behavior. Some people believe that people's activitey are mainly directed by their own minds.
观点:
As far as I am concerned, I believe that people's activities are restricted under different kind of regulations, which are not made by themselves.
主体
理由 :
The society people live in today is full of different focres, rules, and regulations, no matter in which country people live. For example , the students have to obey the rules of the in school. A college student will not receive his or her diploma without finishing the requried courses and obtaining enough credits. If one society lack of basic forces and laws to control people's behavior, the society will fall into disordered.
理由 :
If people don't care about the outside world and concentrate to much to themselves, it is likely that the society will lack of the respectation cooperation among the people.
理由 :
People's behavior is determined by multiple forces which can not be decided by themselves. For example, the enviroment one person grows un in is determined by one's family, nationality and enthnic culture.
结尾
让步:
Although certain forces that come from one's herat will help that person to achieve his or her goal, such as the self confidence. At the same time, people have to be guided by the laws and rules in the society.
总结:
To sum up, the world people live in is full of regulations and connections. One single person can not survive in an absence of restriction.
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