GRE 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:Alice_918
The surest indicator of a great nation is not the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but the general welfare of all its people.
题目分析
翻译
一个伟大国家最真实的体现不是其统治者、艺术家或者科学家的成就,而是其中所有人的全民福利。
指导
本题讨论国家伟大的体现形式问题,题目认为相对于个人成就,全面福利才是国家伟大的最真实体现。在分析的过程中,可以从统治者、艺术家、科学家的个人成就以及全民福利都可以展现国家哪些方面的内容,这些展现的表现形式、彼此之间的关系以及概括性、真实性等方面展开思考。需要注意:1、无论在论述统治者、艺术家、科学家的成就还是全民福利,论点都应该在讨论的是the surest indicator;2、题目给出的是achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists而不是国家的艺术科技政治水平,分析要针对某人的 achievement;3、对于此题这种对比型的题目,需要注意不应孤立得去分析二者各自的利弊,而是应当将二者放在一起通过对比、类比等方法将差异展现出来,这样才能说明哪个更好。
1. 请列举历史上的几个伟大国家、这些国家统治者、艺术家、科学家的成就以及全民福利情况。并分析这些内容在我们了解这些国家的过程中起到的作用。
回答: 中国明朝的永乐盛世时期,明成祖朱棣在位期间采取了许多措施大力发展经济,他统治期间社会安定、国家富强。并在执政期间名人编写《永乐大典》成为中国史上最大的百科全书。维多利亚时期是英国最强盛的所谓“日不落帝国”时期,经济文化空前繁荣。英国涌现出牛顿以来最伟大的科学家麦克斯韦,莎士比亚以来最杰出的文学家狄更斯。
2. 统治者、艺术家或者科学家的成就和国家伟大程度之间的关系都有哪些?请结合具体国家、人物以及其成就分析并简述。
回答: 往往是在盛世的时候才会涌现出一批优秀的艺术和科学人才。也正是这些人推动国家的前进发展。
3. 全民福利和国家伟大程度之间的关系有哪些?请结合具体国家和当时的全民福利情况分析并简述。
回答: 全民福利得到满足的时候国家也是繁荣昌盛的时候。明朝永乐年间。
4. 同全民福利相比,统治者、艺术家或者科学家的成就在反映国家是否伟大的时候,是否存在局限性或者不合理的地方?如果没有,为什么?如果有,请举例并简述。
回答: 有局限性,不能代表当时国家的整体状况。牛顿是英国史上最为有名的科学家之一但当时的英国刚刚经历革命推翻复辟王朝建立君主立宪制,建立起资产阶级和新贵族领导政权。但并不是英国最为繁荣的时候。
5. 还有哪些标准或者条件可以反映国家的伟大程度?这些内容同全民福利相比,有哪些优势和不足?整体考虑,是否全民福利是对国家伟大程度最真实的反映?
回答: 对邻近国家的影响,对世界的影响。全民福利反映的是一个国家内部的稳定,是国家强大的保证,这个伟大说的是国家的稳定。而艺术,科学,政治的贡献反映的是一个国家势力的强大和产生的影响。
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作文
The judgment of a country can be made from different aspects,the GDP,military degree, international competetence ets. But what is the surest indicator of a great nation. I basically agree witht the contention of the speaker that compare to the achievement in arts, rules or scientist, the general warefare of people can better represent.
Before we start to discuss, we should fitst figure out the meaning of great nation. A truly great nation the life of people is abundant. As the carrier of  a country, the qualification of people's life represent the inner powerfull. Among it, the warefare of people can be effectivelly judged. The warefare come from the finance income of a country, the more complete kinds for warefares, the more funds a country should invest. In that case only for those coutries which have resolved the basic social problem can have the ability to improve  the warefare system. Hence the ecomomy or distinction between poverty and wealth  is not a problem for such countries any more, they care more about how to guarantee the needs of their residents satisfied. Switish one of the highist warefare countries in the world, people live here from birth to die will enjoy the social benefit. Even an unemployee is never need to worry about their life, the warefare ensure them not to suffere a misery life. The life of a people embody the development of a coutry, for those undeveloped country, the majority part of the income is stilll used to solve the poverty, food and other foundamental problems which is not the representation of a great nation. On the other hand we should also see the point that the switsh is also the country has the highest suiside rate. People cannot find their value is believing they are the people castin off by the society for even lose a job they still can live a life. Hence the warefare may more or less lose the dication meaning for the greatness of a country. Because the happiness of a country also as another important stander measure the greatness level.
Another indicator that also represent the greatness of a country is the development level of politic, arts and scientce. Ameirca one of the greatest countries in the present world without the highest benefits but surpassing the switsh become the number one of the world. Apart from the highest GDP in the world, America is also the country with the majority winners of Nobel in science, arts and other field. It is also the country has a farily complete politic system and institution. As another way to wtight a country, the achievement in rule, arts and science can minnor the strength of a country. Similarity to the warefare those things may only be highly developed only when people's life is ensured. Otherwise the investment of a goverment may maily used in solving those social consliction. The present financial crisis lead the rate of  job-losing break the highest levle in 25 years. The goverment have to cut the budget in the reserach of NASN. Thus, the countries greatness more or less has a relationship with the achievement in those fields. The existence is the first condition for a human being to be satisfied, and the appearance of talent is base on it. The former is the necessarry condition a great nation should be equipeed, and the later can be sawed its specific representation. In tang dynasy China is one of the greatist countries in the world, and it is at that time the achivement in arts is unprecedented prosperous. Without the basic foundation of material, people's spitit is unable to develope.
Synthesis the idea mentioned above, in my opinnion the warefare or the ahiviement all cannot be seen the surest indicator. The comprehensive measure is needed. The sysethesized judgment of  a country is vital and necesary. A great country can be reflected from many aspects, the sigular stander may lead a objective point of view. The truly greatness country may not have the greatest achievement in arts, rules and science. And it also does not have a highly development warefare system. In that case people should judge a country from a comorehensive view. The achievement and warefare only as the two respective aspects reflect the one side of a country.
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