GRE 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:隋语
The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals. [Specific Task Instruction: Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.]
题目分析
翻译
目前生活的奢华和方便阻碍了一个人成长为真正强大和独立的个体。 [说明:写一篇文章,讨论你同意或反对这个说法达到什么程度,并解释你选择这个观点的理由。在展开和支持你的观点时,你需要考虑这个说法可能在哪些方面成立或者不成立,并解释你所考虑的这些东西如何体现你的观点]
指导
本题改编自老GRE的ISSUE26"Although many people think that the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life are entirely harmless, in fact, they actually prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals"。题目要求阐述的是奢华和方便的生活是否会影响一个人的成长,换句话说,就是要论证奢华和方便的生活是否会影响到人的独立性和能力的培养。这个题目切忌对生活的方便之处进行罗列;并且,在写作的时候一定要有明确的观点,并针对观点来选择可以使用的理由和论据。
1. 回忆一下自己的成长过程,生活条件如何?这种生活条件是否对成长造成了影响?如果是,具体阐述是什么影响,并举例说明。
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2. 奢华和方便的生活会给人的独立性和能力培养提供什么好处?带来什么问题?请举例说明。
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3. 人的成长,尤其是个人能力和独立性,会受到哪些因素的影响?这些因素是否都和生活质量有关系?如果有,具体是什么关系?请举例说明。
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4. 比较贫困的生活会给人的独立性和能力培养带来什么好处?带来什么问题?请举例说明。
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作文
The luxuries and conveniences of life may not prevent people from developing into a truly strong and independent person.  And since people's characters are influenced by many aspects, it is hard to say that only one condition may result in a dependent and feeble individual.                       Of course, life today becomes more convenient and luxury, which gives people more lures to depend on the technology and be lazy no matter in actions or in thoughts.  Since electronic machines instead of humans' hands, people who used to be industrious change to rely on these machine and some even replace their thinking.  When you search the things you want on Internet, it is convenient for you just copying which you get through the computer from the others' opinions.  And there is not necessary for you to think about the problem yourself to get your valuable thoughts.  From this way, people would lose their critical thinking and become a machine that could only copy the ideas from others.         However, when we change our angle for searching things online, it may have a alternative result.  Searching on Internet can provide you too much information, which let you select the useful information from all of these yourself.  The process of selecting is a process of critical thinking.  And computer just provides a chance to short your time for find materials to complete your mind, and it is not trying to free your brain from thinking.         Meanwhile, when people refute the modern life's convenience and luxury, he might support another situation where people live a poor and hard life.  Does this kind of life really help people become a strong and independent man?  Perhaps not.  People in the hard life may have to rely on themselves and thus develop his independence.  But it is just a way to waste time, wasting the time which could do more other things.  Besides, if people stay in the hard environment too long, they would be hopeless to life and be a fragile people, which is more harmful than people with hope but not independence.          What is more, it is not exhaustively to say that only life condition could affect people's living, which is a thing that have to be analyzed from many aspects.  Such as the level of education, personal value and the parents' help, all these factors could affect a personal life.  If one live in a rich family, must he be not independent?  Certainly, it is not true.  Considering the possible good education he may get in his life, it would train him as a independent and strong man in a more scientific method, which would be more successful than through experiencing a poor life.         People cannot refute the convenient life which may not bring the lazy and frangibility to people, and choosing how to living in the two kinds of life is more likely to depend on people themselves.
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