GRE 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:sophie_903
Only through mistakes can there be discovery or progress.
题目分析
翻译
只有通过错误才能实现进步或获得新的发现。
指导
本题需要思考的是,人们通过那些途径获得了进步或得到了新的发现,是否“只有”通过错误才能达到这些目标。当错误发生的时候,是否会对发现和进步起到正面的作用。需要提醒的是,本题不是要你阐述错误到底有没有用,而要分析错误和发现以及进步的关系。
1. 描述一个你自己犯错的事情,并分析你是否从这次犯错中得到了进步或者发现了一些新的东西。
回答: 在准备申请过程中,我错误的估计了自己的能力,时间安排的非常不合理,导致最后错过了理想学校的申请。在非常懊恼中,我意识到认识自己、不要拖拉的重要性,立志做到今日事今日毕。
2. 人们获得进步或者得到新的发现的方法和途径有哪些?请举例说明。
回答: 错误不是目的,也不是手段,只是一种不可避免的现象。 不懈的努力,渊博的知识,宽广的心胸,运气。比如青霉素的发现,就是偶然的。
3. 错误能带给人什么样的启示?这种启示是否可以让人有进步或者发现一些新的东西?请举例说明。
回答: 错误是一种相对挫败的经历,会暴露出一些自己不能意识到的问题,比如,对自己错误的估计,对国际形势的错误判断,从而让人印象深刻,为成功指明方向。
4. 如果人们犯错以后不进行总结和分析,会出现什么情况?如果这样,人们会获得进步或得到新的发现么?请举例说明。
回答: 很难进步,只是不断的重复。有些人一直在抱怨,悔恨,既不反思自己的行为是否能达成目标,也不反思如何改正,最终只能后悔遗憾。
5. 通过犯错得到的发现或获得的进步具有什么特点?请举例说明。
回答: 1.曲折 2.深刻:因为历尽艰辛,所以得到的体验不仅是最后的结果,而是过程中经历的挣扎,放弃与坚持的徘徊,学会忍耐与调整,往往比最终简单的发现或是个人一点点的进步而更深刻。
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作文
For a long time, "Faliure is the mother of success" has encouraged large amount of  "losers" to strive for their dreams and many of them really did it. Also, one of learning theories, namely trial-and-error, believes that the way people could learn is to experience mistakes.  Thus, not only popular saying but also sytemetic theory indicate the positive role of mistakes in the process of discovery or progress. However, is it equivalent to the statement that making mistakes is the only way to advance? No. I maintain that many factors and methods involved in the final results.
Admitedly, numerous cases covering both west and east, ancient and contemproray times could prove errors do accelarate advances. One of the most popolar example is Thomas Edision, a well-known American inventor and scientist, after hundred even thousand times trying and mistaking he successfully found the proper filament namely carbonize bamboo. Owing to the mistakes, he improved the lasting time of light bomb greatly and benefited to the world until nowadays. Furhtermore, others' mistakes also stimulate human being move foreward. Li Shizhen, a great Chinese herbologist and acupuncturist, his book named Compendium of Materia Medica is credited for its proper classification of herb components. However, his twenty-seven years hard work was originated from the finding of others' faults in the published herb books.Therefore, if without the disorder, mistakes and comflict information in most published medical books at that time, it may hardly intrigue him to  write such a book to remend them and leave the treasure of traditional Chinese Medicine.  
Just as Johann Wolfgang Goethe, a German poet and dramatist, says that " Men errs so long as he strives," however, not everyone who commit mistakes could finally achieve their goals or realize their dreams. Why? As far as I am concerned, the reason why mistakes encourage achievement  or progress is not mistakes themselves, but  the attitude we hold toward them.  Recalling to the experience of ourselves, we may easily find that there are more or less mistakes and regrets. Take my procrastination for example, when I was in university I always put out my assignments  and completed them vexedly before the day of deadline. Few of times I missed the deadline and then I made a decision to change this habit. Unfortunately, I did not take this seriously although I really worried about it. Untill one day, due to my procrastination I could not finish my application to the graduate school. This terrible experience teaches me a valuable lesson: I have to admit and change my mistakes with courage and perseverance. Most of times, we often find excuses for our faults or complain others and environment, to large extent this block our way to correct it and stuck in the circle of repeating the same mistakes. Thus, in order to make progress through mistakes, the most important thing we can do is introspect profoundly and take action immediately.
What is more, the way which could lead to new findings like a spectrum embodys various of factors, such as  hard-working, curiosity, learning and reading. However, apart from individual's qualities and experience, a more crucial factor influenced the pace of development is social surroundings. We human beings are social animals, effected by the values and restained by social regulations, moral standards and laws. In ancient times, people eked out in severe natural disasters and attacks. They were struggling to hold their own, thus it sounds unbelievable for our  ancestors  to invent computer, cell phone. However, in modern society, it is not uncommon to use IPHONE, Twitter, Facebook to communicate with people who live in the other side of the world. Such advances attributes to  the intelligent inventors, but also our rapidly developed society. Thus even if ten thousands of  Steve Palu Jobs, one of the founder of Apple, live in the starving and dangerous society, it is yet hard to lead the fashion of high technics.
Consequently, based on the analysis mentioned above, I agree with the statement that mistakes could result in progress, however, I could not accept that it is the only way.
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