TOEFL 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:李璐
In some countries, people are no longer allowed to smoke in many public places and office buildings. Do you think this is a good rule or a bad rule? Use specific reasons and details to support your position.
题目分析
翻译
在一些国家,现在不再允许人们在许多公共场所和办公楼吸烟。你认为这个规定是好还是不好?用具体理由和例子来支持你的观点。
指导
要注意题目讨论的其实就是应不应该禁止人们在公共场所吸烟,这与全面禁烟是不一样的。
1. 你自己吸烟吗?你或者你认识的朋友吸烟一般在什么地方?
回答: 楼道,教室外面,房间外面,花园里
2. 吸烟的危害有哪些?
回答: 对身体不好,还会引起别人的反感
3. 吸烟除了对吸烟者本身有危害,对周边的人有影响吗?
回答: 有,会影响到周围人的身体,情绪
4. 你觉得这个法规还有什么可以改进的地方?
回答: 可以再公共场所设置固定的吸烟室
其他用户的回答
作文
As people are aware of the dangers of the cigarette, the rule is issued that people no longer allowed to smoke in many public places and office buildings. Several people, who oppose the rule,think the rule can confine their habits. However, in my opinion, the rule is good for three reasons.
First of all, smoking is harmful to health, which is either harmful to oneself or to others. If someone smoked in the public places or office building where plentiful people are playing or working, the harmful smoke will invade in  their body through the their breath. The harmful smoke can cause a lot of diseases, such as lung cancer, respiratory illness, heart disease, hypertension and so on, which result in lifelong suffering even death. The people will spend large amounts of money to cure the diseases, furthermore, whose family will lost in sore.
Secondly, smoking can bring about dangerous accidents in the public places or office buildings.  The smoking caused the mountain fires which lead to considerably serious loss about property and the life. For example, in my hometown, there was a mountai fire which is caused by  extinguish the burning of butt littered by a tourest. In order to extinguish the fire, eight firemen died. Meanwhile the forest was damaged with hundreds of plants and animals died and soil ruined.
However, there may be one or two disadvantages of prohibit people's smoking in the public places. Someone,  who is engaged in the special job, need smoke to keep clear-headed. For instance, my father is a driver. when he is driving alone with boring and tired, he always smokes to fix attention to the work.
Although I agree that there may be a couple of disadvantages about the rule, I feel that the advantages are more obvious. In my opinion, that no allowed to smoke in the public places and office buildings is a good rule.
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