GRE 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:尹谦豫
People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making. [Specific Task Instruction: Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.]
题目分析
翻译
人们的行为很大程度上是由自己不能驾驭的力量决定的。[说明:写一篇文章,讨论你同意或反对这个说法达到什么程度,并解释你选择这个观点的理由。在展开和支持你的观点时,你需要考虑这个说法可能在哪些方面成立或者不成立,并解释你所考虑的这些东西如何体现你的观点]
指导
本题讨论对个人行为负责相关的问题,题目认为个人行为并非是自己可以决定的,更多得是被外界左右。本题改编自老GRE的ISSUE93"The concept of 'individual responsibility' is a necessary fiction. Although societies must hold individuals accountable for their own actions, people's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making",和老GRE的ISSUE156"Choice is an illusion. In reality, our lives are controlled by the society in which we live"有互通之处。在分析的过程中,可以从个人责任的意义以及是否必要,影响个人行为的因素,外界对个人行为的影响方面和具体形式、程度等方面展开思考。
1. 如果不存在“个人责任”这个概念,人们的学习、工作、生活以及整个社会的发展都会出现哪些问题?请举例并简述。
回答: 个人方面,一个人做事情,学习,在没有“个人责任“的概念下,就没有了犯错后可能带来的惩罚这一对心理上的压迫,使得人做事情完全放松。对求上进的人或追求完美的人来说可能他们会自觉的做好事情,但是如果一个人缺乏自觉,他很可能不计后果的做事情,并且得到的成果没有质量。 比如,中国历史上就有“合作社”的概念,这就是没有“个人责任”概念的典型例子,人们共同工作,评分劳动成果,这使得很多人不做事,等着其他人做事,最后获得相同分量的劳动成果,带来的后果是人们的积极性下降。后来这一模式失败,重新引入了按劳分配的劳动模式
2. 让个人为自己的行为负责对于社会有哪些好处?请举例并简述。
回答: 首先对自己的行为有了约束,使得自己的劳动效率提高,减少了犯错几率,增加了个人对社会的贡献。对社会来说,个人的行为负责的累加效果就是整个社会秩序的提高,社会生产力的进一步发展。 比如,一个人对自己行为负责,就不会去抢劫放火,这样社会的犯罪率会下降。并且,对自己负责,会使自己在工作时倾向“完美主义”,是的工作成果更优秀
3. 人们的行为都受到哪些因素的影响?请举例并简述。(可从内因、外因两方面分别考虑)
回答: 首先是自身内心因素的影响,情感等。再是社会影响,在社交场合受各种人文因素的影响。这两种影响是可以自控的。比如有朋友推荐你一件商品,你很可能在他的煽动下购买,也可以抵制诱惑不购买。 另外是“不可抗力”的影响,如科学现象,突发灾难等,这些自然真理导致的影响让人们处于被动,是无法自控的。比如山间行车时遇到滑坡山洪。
4. 外界因素在哪些情况下以何种方式影响着人们的行为?请举例并简述。
回答: 科学类的外界因素多数是以“强加”的方式让人接受,因为真理一般是不会改变的,人们只能学习它,研究它,利用它。比如人们研究飞行,必须研究结构力学和空气动力学。这些是永恒的,人们学习他并用来改造自己社会。 人文类因素则是人们占主导权的。社会治安需要法律,法律是由人制定的。国家需要有远见的领导,着依赖于领导自身的品质。人文的外界因素只是给人提供机会,由人占主导去实现。
5. 人们是否可以不顾外界环境的影响而进行自己的选择?如果可以,请举例;如果不可以,请解释原因。
回答: 不可以。人文类因素是牵涉到人际交往,许多事情需要考虑别人的感受,如果不顾外界,很可能对别人在情感上带来伤害使得自己陷入孤立。比如,一个国家要发动战争,需要平衡各种国内矛盾,并展开外交攻势,说明其他人的意见对国家政策的决定有很大影响。 科学因素上,如果违反科学定理或自然规律,做出的结果往往是无效的甚至可能带来灾难。比如,如果一个人想要找到比光速飞的快的物质,目前来看是不现实的。
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作文
This assert seems not a simple idea but containing deep philosophic view about the truth of our behavior and what will determine our behavior.In my own philosophy, I partly agree with the speaker that in many cases human behavior is determined by extent forces, but I also regard force from our inner hart and society a great aspect to influence our behavior.
First, we should make clear that, from the point of philosophy, the whole world could be divided into two systems, one is scientific system and the other is social system. Each part could influence people' behavior differently. While scientific system, concerning about discover and research the nature and truth such as the galaxy and mathematics, will coerce people to accept the truth and follow the nature law, the other part, thus social system, concerning on satisfy human needs and relative between people, is dominated in our own. When we want to fly, we will invent airplane, and take research in aerodynamic and structure. These knowledge is truth and we cannot violet, otherwise will gain little or take pain in accidents. For example, if today we want to find a substance that travels faster than the light, which violet the physic law, it seems impossible. But solving social problems such as war and economic crisis, we are able to make choice our own. Because these problems derived from relationship between people, as an intelligent species, we can take subjective activity to conciliate conflicts thus the problems solved. We need law so manage the society, and the law is established by people. A country need a good leader, and it is largely depended on the leader's own personalities. So we can see that scientific system will force us to determine behavior while we can determine our own behavior in social system field.
Second, talking about the influence from our inner hart, I think our behavior is largely depend on our own. This is about our responsibility that force us to determine our own behavior. Responsibility could produce a potential press on us that we will fear the fail that brings penalty to us. If we lose it, we feel free to do anything, which may be also nothing to a person with good personal quality, but cause more mistakes and hazards to society if the person is poor in personal quality, and his work is relatively low quality.For example, in Chinese history about 1950's, government published a policy that all people working together and all harvest will distributed equally to each one, seems like communism policy. But problems come when people found that even they did nothing, they could get equal pay with others, so they motives has dropped that no one wanted to work, waiting for income. Eventually, the policy has been abandoned, government carried out the policy that every one gain in direct proportion to how many they have down.
In verse, if we have strong responsibility, thus we can determine our behavior on our own, it will be appreciated to contribute our own to society. When we have responsibility, we seems to pursue perfectionism in work to make masterpiece, thus make our work more quality and effect. Accumulating together, the productivity of the whole society will increase and the harvest will be outstanding, so does the development. What is more, the crime rate will decrease due to people who have more responsibility for what they do, they will feel shame and regret to rob.
In deed, the outside aspects is largely influencing how people behave, especially concerning about scientific aspects. But I disagree the asserts that exaggerated the absolute range of effect of influence from outside. When we deal with social problems, we will make decision from our own thought, and if we have strong responsibility, we will behave better in many condition thus inverse promote the behavior social and scientific fields.
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