GRE 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:lhzm
The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people. [Specific Task Instruction: Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.]
题目分析
翻译
一个伟大国家最真实的体现不是其统治者、艺术家或者科学家的成就,而是其中所有人的全民福利。[说明:写一篇文章,讨论你同意或反对这个说法达到什么程度,并解释你选择这个观点的理由。在展开和支持你的观点时,你需要考虑这个说法可能在哪些方面成立或者不成立,并解释你所考虑的这些东西如何体现你的观点]
指导
本题改编自老GRE的ISSUE170"The surest indicator of a great nation is not the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but the general welfare of all its people"。题目讨论国家伟大的体现形式问题,题目认为相对于个人成就,全面福利才是国家伟大的最真实体现。在分析的过程中,可以从统治者、艺术家、科学家的个人成就以及全民福利都可以展现国家哪些方面的内容,这些展现的表现形式、彼此之间的关系以及概括性、真实性等方面展开思考。需要注意: 1、无论在论述统治者、艺术家、科学家的成就还是全民福利,论点都应该在讨论的是the surest indicator; 2、题目给出的是achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists而不是国家的艺术科技政治水平,分析要针对某人的 achievement; 3、对于此题这种对比型的题目,需要注意不应孤立得去分析二者各自的利弊,而是应当将二者放在一起通过对比、类比等方法将差异展现出来,这样才能说明哪个更好。
1. 请列举历史上的几个伟大国家、这些国家统治者、艺术家、科学家的成就以及全民福利情况。并分析这些内容在我们了解这些国家的过程中起到的作用。
回答: 中国唐朝,统治者开明,诗人作品代表中国古代诗歌的最高成就,整个社会繁荣,盛唐~~; 工业革命时期的英法,国家支持工商业,统治者在政策上也较开明,经济发展、社会转型,无数的新发明,商人、资本家等的生活水平高,但是,普通民众的福利不怎么样,改革的好处还没有到达普通民众
2. 统治者、艺术家或者科学家的成就和国家伟大程度之间的关系都有哪些?请结合具体国家、人物以及其成就分析并简述。
回答: 前者的伟大、成就高,可能导致国家的繁荣伟大,但不是一定;eg:乱世涌现伟大的军事家,中国二战前混乱的转型期的文学短期繁荣
3. 全民福利和国家伟大程度之间的关系有哪些?请结合具体国家和当时的全民福利情况分析并简述。
回答: 国家伟大,全民福利高,eg:北欧国家,Denmark, Norway, Switzerland 国家致力于改善公共设施,全民福利高,教育、医疗、老年生活政府承担大部分;国家伟大,全民福利福怎么样,eg:former Soviet Union当时的世界两大超级力量之一,政治军事强大,但是轻工业缺乏,普通老百姓的生活并没有很舒服。
4. 同全民福利相比,统治者、艺术家或者科学家的成就在反映国家是否伟大的时候,是否存在局限性或者不合理的地方?如果没有,为什么?如果有,请举例并简述。
回答: 有,统治者的成就可能建立在国家建设上,也可能在对外侵略上面,这与国家的伟大与否是无关的,eg:Napoleon,很伟大,但是并不因为他个人的丰功伟绩,就说当时的法国是一个伟大的国家,还是要看当时法国的整体经济水平,人们的生活状态;艺术家和科学家的成就也是,eg:1930s的中国,身处二战,被侵略,但是出现了大量的优秀的文学作品,这些优秀的作家的出现并不能表明当时的中国的伟大,那只是有感而发。
5. 还有哪些标准或者条件可以反映国家的伟大程度?这些内容同全民福利相比,有哪些优势和不足?是否全民福利是对国家伟大程度最真实的反映?
回答: 科技水平,国民的受教育水平,民众的社会保障等,全民福利体现民众对国家的满意度,因为国家的只能就是作为一个中央权力机构来满足人们的需求,平衡各个方面的关系,所以全民福利来衡量是可以的
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作文
To evaluate the claim, we may first make clear the definition of "a great nation". If we regard  a country as great only in terms of its high level of technological, art or economic and scientific development, it is no doubt that its rulers, artists or scientists may represent its greatness, but on the contrary, if the greatness on erected on the basis of the nation's overall fulfiment and how its citizens feel about themselves and the government, the general welfare of its people is surely a better yardstick to measure the country's greatness. While the standards are various, I hold the view that, the latter is more objective and people's general welfare is a more measuring method.
It is undeniable that the preeminet artists and scientists can tell us more about a country's highest and most advanced development in a specific country. Take the ancient China during the Tang Dynasty as a compelling illustration, the whole nation was then a prosperous entity, and the poets and writers are prolific due partly to the booming of the economy and the relatively amiable political atmasphere. In addition, the literature achievement of that period is  the highest in the history of ancient China, as well as the greatness of the nation. Nowadays, when people talk about the prosperity of China, they still mention the Tang Dynasty.
However, the highest level of a nation can not reflect its overall greatness in some other conditions. For example, in the industrial revolution of 18 century France, the machinery and manufacturing field are so booming that France, in combination with its neighbor-the Great Britain-constitute the most advanced technological level and the wealthiest kindom in the world,  while in contrast to the prosperity of the whole nation, its low-class citizens generally lived miserable live, working long hours and were kept in a low wage level. Apparently, such France can not be called a great nation.
Compared to the artists and scientists, the general welfare of the common people is another good choice to measure the development of a country. Not only because the objective of a government is to facilitate the life of its citizens, but also for the reason that the what common people view their country is able to cover all aspects of the administration of the country, including the economy, the policy, the jurisprudence, as well as the educaion, the art and the communication. Just witness the people's life in several northen Europe countries like Denmark, Norway and Switzerland, where the general welfare of the whole society is so high that people all possess a viable job and a stable health insurance. Even though there are no prodigious leaders and artists or scientists that may change the world economic systems or impress the the art realm, we have to recognize that they are all great nations.
From what has been discussed above, we reach the conclusion that the achievement of a nation's rulers and artists or scientists can be a yardstick to weigh the development of the nation, but it may not be the most exact way. Considering the objective of a goverment,  the general welfare of its people can be a better mearsurement for the weighing of a country's greatness.
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