TOEFL 作文题目 来源于朗播用户:Richie_zc
【IBT机经-1】Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: In order to succeed, you should be more like others than be different from everyone else.
题目分析
翻译
你是否同意下述观点:为了成功,你更应该变得和其他人一样而不是与众不同。
指导
题目讨论为了成功应该怎样做的问题。题目中的前提条件是“获得成功“,给出了”如果人们变得和其他人相似就会取得成功“的判断。题目不难理解,和成功有关的实例也不胜枚举,分析题目和拓展写作思路时应该注意以下2点:1、明确自己的观点,到底是同意还是不同意;2、论述中要始终和”获得成功“与”自己和他人的关系“相关联,切忌脱离了题目的前提是”获得成功“。
1. 在我们的日常生活和社会历史中,获得成功的人都应该具备那些素质?这些成功人士是和其他人一样呢还是与众不同呢?请结合实例简述。
回答: successive persons should have some outstanding qualities, such as persistence, faith, friendliness and so on. these famous people is different from everyone else. for example, Jobs is a person who always pursues perfect to design Apple's products. So Iphone's shape is simple, but its appearence is very beautiful and concise. people can use only one key called "home" to handle with all kinds of softwares. because of its merits, many people become Apple fans and Apple company earns much money.
2. 成功人士的身上,哪些特点是具有普遍性的?那些特质是具有特殊性的?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: To successive persons, love, persistence, friendliness and hard-work are popular. for example, Edison tried almost a thousand times to creat light bumb. if he gave up before he gained success, he didn't creat the first light bumb. Gunious, talent and oppotunity are special. A is a great scientist beause his parents are very rich, they take a lot of money to support him. therefore, he can dovote himself to study the planet in solar system.
3. 变得和大家相似会出现哪些结果?在什么情况下有助于成功?什么情况下不利于成功?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: after becoming similar to folks, on the one hand, we can lose some creative thougts. for example, if Newton thought the same to other people, when he saw the apple falled from the apple tree, he didn't find 万有引力。 on the other hand, we can know the folks' condition. due to understand the folks' difficulties, we can find the source of problem in order to deal with problems.
4. 变得和大家不同有哪些结果?在什么情况下有利于成功?什么情况下不利于成功?请结合具体事例简述。
回答: 有独特的性格和奇特的想法。在面对一个困难时,有自己不一般的解决方案。例如:司马光和一群小朋友一起玩耍时,有个小朋友掉进水缸了,别人还在想着怎么把人捞出来的时候。司马光已经拿起石头把缸砸开,救出了小朋友。当性格不合群时,容易使自己被孤立。
5. 变得和他人一样也好,不一样也罢,对成功究竟能起到多大的作用?为了获得成功,除了题目中涉及的那方面问题,还需要那些优秀的品质呢?请结合实例简述。
回答: 勇敢,果断,努力,坚持
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作文
Our world is built with the variety people just as the a house is built with the variety furnitures. It is because this variety elements, our world and our lives gradually develop maturely.  观点:世界每一次的进步都是因为那些不平凡的人做出了不一样的举动。In order to succeed, people should not be more like others because successful people always have the different opinions, uphold their convictions and do things that others afraid to do.主体  理由 :In order to succeed, people should not be more like others because successful people always have the different opinions, uphold their convictions and do things that others afraid to do.结尾  让步:admittedly, 一味的与众不同也有他的局限性。当你走在错误的一条路上,也许跟随别人的脚步也使一种成功。  总结:In order to be a succeed, people should do themselves because create new things, consist believe and do some thing others afraid to do will give them a new life and new world.
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